Welcome to the page that I use to view all the stories I've read and liked. I'll favorite any story that I enjoyed to read, as well as most of the newer stories that I follow. In most cases, if the story doesn't get an update in over a year, but I feel that the story has promise, I'll add it to my community. So far I think I've only ever moved like one or two stories back. I used to read H/G, but I've since realized that H/Hr makes a lot more sense (to me at least) from both the books and movies. I do like some of the less popular females with Harry as well: Tonks, Fleur, Gabrielle, Daphne, Luna, Narcissa, Bellatrix, etc.

I've had more than a few plot bunnies running around my head, but I'm not sure if I will develop them into stories. I'll list them out if anyone wants to take a stab at turning them into stories. All I ask is that you credit me for the idea.

Rampant Plot Bunnies

1) At the end of 4th year, Harry does very heavy research into the Wizenmagot and their laws to find ways to make the Ministry help him. He finds out that the Potter House is an Ancient and Most Noble House, and that what distinguishes them is a Fae Ring. Certain families had the honor of getting these rings eons before due to their services to other magical creatures, and were blessed with the rings (LotR-like element). Harry uses this knowledge during his trial in 5th year against Fudge, Umbridge, and Malfoy. Malfoy has been faking his Ancient and Most Noble house title. (very-classy!Harry/Daphne via Marriage Contract or no ship)
2) Oneshot: Harry beats the Triwizard Tournament using nothing but Accio. COMPLETE.
3) Oneshot: H/Hr love but have to marry Ginny/Ron respectively due to Marriage Law. Hidden romance.
4) Pseudo-Manipulative Dumbledore seems to have done everything wrong with raising Harry, but it turns out he was being forced to take the fall for everything.
5) Crackfic: Xanth-like magic. Neville has the power to make women lose control.
6) Oneshot: Umbridge pisses off Hermione in the first class. Hermione in return uses Skeeter to get dirt on Umbridge and finds out the toad faked her own OWLs.
7) Oneshot: Smart!Harry records all his time with Umbridge and uses it to topple the MoM.
8) Magic is a sentient force that allows itself to be used by Wizards and Witches. Harry discovers this, along with the actual laws that magic set for those who use it, and uses these laws against his enemies.
9) Evil!Harry. After the DoM, Harry absorbs the Horcrux into him gaining it's power, but also making him evil. He discovers a way of stealing a witch's magic during copulation, and starts to kidnap witches everywhere for their power.
10) Crackfic: Harry discovers that gingers don't actually have souls. There is a giant conspiracy of gingers to marry people with souls to steal theirs. He sacrifices the Weasley family to take out the Horcrux and Voldemort. Gingers created and control the Dementors.
11) Oneshot: After baby-Harry vanquishes Voldemort, the Taboo is placed on "Dark Lord" which leads to the arrest of all the DE.
12) Dumbledore forced Harry into the Triwizard Tournament under a 4th school. Turns out to be Salem, grants him immunity from Britain's laws, and lets him leave Hogwarts with Hermione and Luna.
13) The End of the World: The entire population of Humans comes to an End from a very Unexpected source. Draco has always been nothing but bluffs, but got lucky and with a book from the Malfoy library, messes up a spell that makes it worse and actually kills every non pureblood in the world. With such massive losses, the pureblood are left with nothing to rule over. They don't know how to create anything and with the massive loss of life on the planet, there exists no magic for them to use.
14) Both Harry and Hermione are voyeur lovers and spy on each other. They find out about each other and get together.
15) When Albus was young, he used Dark magic to steal his brother's magic and intelligence. Harry finds out and reverts the magic and takes out Albus and Tom with Aberforth's help.
16) Magic is a living creature. It came to earth a long time ago, and it feeds off the life of other creatures. It is a strange relationship though; while the creature of Magic takes life away to sustain itself, due to how it has spread to so many creatures of Earth, the drain per each person is very minimal, whereas the ability to use magic gives far more benefits and actually extends life. Slytherin!Harry route finds the way to kill the creature, but thus completely removes all magic. (All humans are muggles. All non-humans loose their magical properties). Gryffindor!Harry forms a small group of friends and family that will protect the secret of magic.
17) As a young child at the Dursleys, Harry doesn't get very much positive attention. A teacher has a Parent-Teacher Conference with the Dursleys and points out how Harry is brilliant at math. Instead of being upset, Vernon sees this as a good thing. He gives Harry many books in Finance, and young Harry learns the importance of money. While he doesn't gain his family’s love, he does gain their respect. After he becomes a wizard, he learns of just how many ways he can make money using magic.
18) Sirius talks to Harry a lot through letters after his third year. He tells Harry about his Heritage and family. In secret, he claims the mantle of Lord Potter. When Harry gets interviewed by Rita Skeeter, it goes badly at first until Harry remembers something Sirius told him. As a Lord, he has immense political power, and threatens Rita. She quickly realizes her mistake. She publishes many articles about Harry’s life at the Dursleys, and the Ministry’s flaws. H/Fleur.
19) When Voldemort invades Harry's mind in 5th year, it marks him, but his mark is different. He is able to manipulate the magic of the mark to call upon magic to punish the deatheaters as it sees fit. It kills all of the male death eaters. Voldemort is still weak and the loss of all of the followers magic is enough to kill him. All of the female DEs become Harry's sex slaves. Harry's friends reject him when they see the marked arm in the hospital, and don't listen to him. Harry gains most of the gold from all the DEs so he buys an island for his new Harem.
20) After 5th year, Charlie Weasley dies instead of Sirius. Ron decides to formally 'break-up' with with Harry and ropes in Ginny and Neville to do it as well (Neville really only signs because he's jealous of Ginny's affection for Harry). Ron knows Hermione is too devoted to Harry to sign it, so he plans with Ginny to deceive her. She signs what she thinks is just a sheet in a photo album, but it was under an illusion. Luna signs it willingly and then tells Harry everything. She tells him how they all owe him their lives through various points, he can use the contract as a means to say they are trying to break the life debt and force them into slaves. Luna wanted to be his slave and knew that Harry would never have accepted her as such otherwise. Harry ends up with 2 servants (Ron and Neville) that are basically his house elves. He has concubines Luna, Hermione, and sex slave Ginny.
21) Crack!Fic. When Dumbledore was rummaging around his closet of knickknacks for the Goblet of Fire, he found the wrong one and found the Goblet of Strange Love Bounds. DD allows 4th years and up to submit their names. This goblet magically binds people together. Harry gets a ton of girls (may include Hermione, Fleur, Daphne, Luna), Ron gets Ginny, Fred and George get some Durmstrang twins, Malfoy gets Crabbe and Goyle, Susan gets Hannah, etc.
22) Malfoy knows that he funds a large part of Voldemort's operations, and is his chief Financial advisor. So where did Voldemort get this manor from, why did he not say anything about it during the first war, and why is he not revealing it's past? He finds out out the truth of the manor's origin and V's muggle family. He quietly starts removing and undermining V. He gets Narcissa to brew a power-saping potion. He reveals V's background, and takes his place. His son, however, can't keep his mouth shut and brags about it. With solid motive, the Aurors can preemptively attack.
23) Hr/Crookshanks. Ron and Harry don't return for their 7th year in order to pursue jobs in the rebuilt Ministry. Hermione goes back to Hogwarts to finish her 7th year, and becomes Head Girl. Without her companions and adventures, she ends up with a lot more time on her hands and learns how to become an animagus. She ends up as a small brown cat. When she first successfully transforms, she hasn't gotten control over the animal instincts. Crookshanks jumps and rapes her. She panics and isn't able to transform back or push him off. She starts to like it a lot, but is ashamed by the feelings. After he finishes and walks off, she is able to muster up her strength to transform back. After not changing for weeks, she actually wants to be fucked again, so she transforms and waits for Crookshanks. He finds out it's Hermione, but that she wants it and she gets fucked by him every day.
24) Spinoff from above, During the Christmas holidays when Hermione goes to visit Harry at Grimmauld Place, she brings Crookshanks. She tells Harry about her Animagus form, and transforms. Harry notes how Crookshanks reacts, and knows. He asks Hermione, who freaks out that someone knows and only stops with Harry grabs her and kisses her hard. He slowly reveals that he had a similar experience with Hedwig and his owl form. They form a quartet of sorts.
25) Unwanted Child: James grew up with no siblings and Lily grew up with one that hated her. Neither had plans for children, and certainly not that soon after graduating. Harry came as a surprise. James first drafted his will when he became of age, and with the surprise child, never thought about updating it. As such, Harry doesn't actually inherit anything from parents.
26) OC character (friend or professor) who uses multiple wands. Harry somehow sees one wriststrap that has three wands, and it's revealed he has more than one, each with many wands. Like Ollivander said, each wand can be good at a particular subject. Given the right person and ingredients, one could have many wands suited to different purposes. A strong wand could make a weak wizard stronger than a normal wizard with a normal wand.
27) H/Daphne. It is the scene of Daphne's wedding to Malfoy Sr (by marriage contract from her father). During the lines, it is read as "Pureblood Malfoy to Pureblood Daphne". When it comes to "Does anyone object?" Harry says yes. This causes a lot of outrage, but Harry say he objects to Malfoy calling himself a Pureblood...after all, no muggle can be a Pureblood. Malfoy pulls out his wand to curse Harry, and nothing comes out. Harry reveals that he killed Malfoy's master a couple hours ago, and as such, has sapped all DEs of their magic, making them muggle. Since Daphne said her line, the magic is waiting for the reply from the pureblood, so Harry steps in to marry her.
28) During 5th year, Hermione looks into the Hogwarts Laws after Umbridge's 'teaching'. She founds a law saying that professors are required to verbally give instructions that pertain to the course. She brings the rule to dumbledore, who is able to throw Umbridge out of the school. A different law that deals with the punishment of rule-breaking states that not only is the guilty teacher affected, but also the party that appointed her, the ministry. Magic enforces it and Hogwarts cannot be influenced by the ministry.
29) H/RR. Harry is exploring the Chamber of Secrets during the beginning of 5th year, and stumbles upon a suite of rooms. A nice, comfortable bedroom, bathroom, and an extensive library, full of all subjects including Dark Arts. Harry discovers a hidden room under the bedroom which contains a beautiful sleeping woman. He eventually learns the woman is Rowena Ravenclaw, preserved in time through Salazar's dark magic. The best counter for it is love magic, and Harry has to bring her to orgasm 100 times, or around three times a day to purge the magical coma and bring her back. All the sex helps him out with his stress levels and he doesn't act as rash, while all the books help him learn even more.
30) H/Hogwarts. After a row with Ron and Hermione about Malfoy being a DE, Hermione jinxes him to need to pee as he is retreating out through the portrait. He stumbled into the Room of Requirements looking for a bathroom. Instead of traditional toilets, each stall contains statues of women is various enticing positions with entrances gapped. Normally Harry would be more curious but the urge is too much and he dashes to one bent over to piss in her vagina. As he finishes, the statue comes to life and fucks him.
31) DD isn't the chess master, Snape is. He's the biggest Slytherin exist, and far smarter than anyone ever realized. He was already super intelligent at 11, and did have a huge crush on Lily. However, the better he became friends with her, the more he realized she was too different and would never go along with his plans. He arranged for their break in friendship as another piece of the puzzle. He uses his own invented potions to control DD to make it seem like he is the one in control.
32) There has been a Marriage contract between the Black and Potter families for many generations. It was originally that that Dorea Black fulfilled the contract with Charlus Potter, but it turns out she was born through a surrogate mother and blood-adopted into the family. Her parents kept it a secret they couldn't naturally conceive, and she never knew she was a half-blood. As such, she didn't meet the contract requirements. During the 5th year ministry fight, Harry uses a switching spell on Sirius and Lucius. With an eligible unmarried Black woman, the contract becomes active again. Narcissa was only loyal to her husband because of her contract marriage, and now she's completely devoted to Harry.
33) Same marriage contract as above. Harry grabbed a time turner during the fray and gets knocked into the veil instead of Sirius. Combination of magic sends him back in time. Harry doesn't know what happens or who he can trust (after visiting the Weasley house to see it very different) so he goes to Gringotts. After a Blood Revealing Ritual, the contract kicks in. Various Goblins in Gringotts get notified, and each one sends out a notice and copy of the contract to each of the black sisters (Narcissa, Bellatrix, Andromeda). Through pure coincidence they sign it at the exact same time.
34) In the first book, Vernon shoots Hagrid with the shotgun before Hagrid can break it. While magically resistant as a half-giant, his skin isn't any harder and he starts bleeding out. The Dursleys decide to flee even more. Eventually, they get caught by Amelia Bones, Auror Director. It comes out how they left Hagrid to die and that the Dursleys were under spells to want to keep Harry, but not love
35) Hermione is in a medical examination in St. Mungos. She founds our her core was bound by DD, and she has obliviations. She's upset and confronts him. Turns out she is insanely powerful, and had all sorts of uncontrolled magic as a baby. It was too much power for her body, and was damaging her. In a fit of being upset, her magic lashed out and killed her birth parents and cousin. The Ministry requested DD's help to bind her magic. When he at first refused, the Minister gave him the ultimatum, take an oath and do the binding or he would find someone else. DD did the bind but included a way for only him to easily remove it. She was 'switched' with her dead cousin to grow up with her Aunt and Uncle.
36) Petunia and Vernon take a different approach to Harry. Instead of punishing him for his 'freakishness', they teach him all the negative effects of magic. They tell him what they know of the war and show all the news articles they can about the consequences of magic. Harry learns to believe magic is dangerous and not to be trusted. He is a powerful wizard though, so his magic reacts to his feelings. He studies Yoga and meditation to unknowingly create occlumency barriers that would repress his own magic. As such, the Owls are unable to find his magical signature. DD looks for him, but he's moved with his family. Eventually, V's minions find him and kidnap him bring V back to life. After V comes back, he can't do any magic. By using Harry's blood, he gave Harry a power over his own magic, which is also getting repressed. V is easily defeated with no magic and a weak body, and Harry becomes a doctor.
37) Wrong BWL. Harry grows up with Dursleys, not knowing his family. When he gets to Gringotts, he finds out he is actually the elder Potter child, and as there is another Potter in the family, he must assume the head of the family. Puts his brother as a traitor to the family in the Family Grimoire. His brother cannot even verbally call himself a Potter.
38) After his 6th year, Harry learns that Horcrux are actually fairly common. While they can anchor someone from dying, they are also very weak and easy to remove with magic. However, due to the blood wards that DD put on Harry, the Horcrux in his head became one of the most magically protected things ever. It's only due to that that V continues to live and not fade out.
39) Harry goes to Gringotts, finds out DD has been screening his mail, and he has a ton of marriage contracts. Decides to accept them. Over 200 of them.

Harry/Lily
40) During the Department of Mysteries, Harry grabs a Time Turner thinking it could be useful later. During the fight between Voldemort and Dumbledore, two spells mix together and hit him sending him back in time, but erasing large parts of his memory. He gets sorted into Ravenclaw and embodies all the good qualities of James Potter, and none of the arrogance. Lily falls for him.
41) Post-DH. Harry keeps all three Hallows. On a Blue Moon, he uses the stone to bring back his mother, but a rare event occurs and he brings her body back to life, not her spirit. It has no conscious identity, but thinks Harry is insanely sexy.
42) spinoff from above; Lily does retain her identity. Ginny being jealous of the closeness of Harry and Lily tries to dose him with powerful love, stamina, and endurance potions. The mixed components clear the binding to Ginny, so Lily has to have lots of sex with him to burn through it.
43) James and Lily have a very kinky sex life in Hogwarts. Lily hears from a muggle friend of hers about a DP and she wants to try it with James, but no one else. James digs through his family's library for a spell that will duplicate him. He finds one, but when he tries to use it, it doesn't work quite correctly. His 'clone' seems to have a scar and slightly different body structure all over. However, his clone is also packing it large, so he knows lily will love it. (Harry thinks it's a very vivid dream)
44) Story starts out as H/Hr during the last battle, no Horcrux. Hermione puts herself in front of a killing curse meant for Harry, her only thought is that she wants Harry to be happy. When the next killing curse hits Harry, he wants up in an alternative world (with no memory of his past life, or death tells him he died and offers him a chance to be happy). Here, his parents are James and Hermione Potter. Being the smartest witch of her age, with a boyfriend with powerful political presence, Hermione Granger figures out how to block a killing curse and sets a trap for Voldemort. He dies that Halloween, and Harry grows up with a loving family. On the train to Hogwarts in his first year, he meets a young girl that reminds him of his mother, a certain Lily Evans.
45) During Harry's 6th year, when Ginny is spiking him with love potions keyed to her, Harry isn't reacting. Instead, every night he has very vivid dreams about having sex with Lily. He eventually gets her pregnant, but just think it's one continuous dream. She gives birth, and it's a black mass of darkness, the horcrux from his head. She uses the sword of Gryffindor to kill it. When he wakes up later, he sees a blackened spot on the ground where she slayed the horcrux in his dream.
46) Crack!fic AU. Voldemort kills James who gives protection to Harry. Lily was out visiting some friends arranging for a harem for Harry. He is vanquished while Harry grows up with her. Lily is a partial Veela, who as a race gather their magic from sex. James was a powerful wizard, which is why he attracted her, but now she needs a wizard just as powerful to be satisfied. She survives by giving Harry blowjobs until he is old enough to fuck her. Thus, Harry adapts a taste for older witches. He pulls in Narcissa, Bellatrix, Andromeda, Poppy, Mrs. Patil, Mrs. Brown, Mrs. Delacour, and Mrs. Chang. Sideplot of Hermione having Bill, Charlie, Percy, Fred, and George. Ron attempts to get Hermione through potions but instead gets Ginny.
47) Crack!Fic AU. Harry is exploring the world after destroying Voldemort easily. He is currently visiting Japan with his trust companion, Dobby. Dobby think he needs to get laid so he makes secret arrangements for Harry to 'win' a chance to play on a gameshow. There is a wall with some hot girls behind it, with cutouts for their breasts and vaginas to be seen. If Harry can give all of them orgasms, he will win. The girls are under imperiuses by Dobby, with their permission. He tricks them into allowing him to cast a spell on them that would help Harry. There is Lily, Hermione, Daphne, Tracey, Luna, Padma, Susan, and Hannah. In the special meal Harry gets beforehand, there are potions of fertility. He fondles and fucks all of them, as well as gets them pregnant.
48) Neville is the Boy who Lived, while Harry is a very shy and meek kid. He's not particularly attractive. Smart, but lazy and unmotivated. He has made some attempts at dating that has never succeeded and has obliterated any self esteem. He lives with his mom who is always wrapped up in work. In 5th year, he joins Neville's DA. During one session before the Christmas Holidays, he gets hit with a stray stunner and falls down behind a couch, where no one sees him. After the session, the girls turn the room into a giant communal shower. Harry wakes up completely hidden. He hears the sound of water so he slow gets up before he sees what is going on. He is fascinated by all of the naked female beauty that he's never seen before. For the next few days, he masturbates furiously to those memories, but he can't feel that trill of seeing the forbidden. During the holidays, he asks Sirius about the charms on the talking mirror (under the guise of watching to learn how to prank). It's a two charm process, ingoing and outgoing. Harry knows his mother has an amazing figure and charms the mirror in her bathroom for outgoing. For the next few days, he masturbates to his mother's showers. Because of how much time Harry is spending in his room, Lily is a little worried. She uses a listening charm in his room and finds out. She's at first disgusted but gets turned on by the idea of being watched. The next morning she puts on a show and can hear the effect it has on her son. She confronts him about it and seduces him after seeing his massive dick.
49) Harry is carrying Lily's soul inside him. When he goes to visit her tomb at Potter Manor, her soul goes back into her body. Harry carries her back into Potter Manor and gets a healer from St. Mungos to help them out. Lily wakes up, and Harry tells her about his life. She knows she is in Potter Manor, but she tells Harry that she can't stay. Only those with Potter blood, or in intimate relations with a Potter can stay. Despite giving birth to Harry, she is not considered a Potter by the house's magic. Harry has to have sex with her every night for her to continue to live there. He gets her pregnant before he leaves for Hogwarts, as the child of Potter blood inside her allows her to stay.
50) Harry is helping to clean the black library (5th year) and comes across a book about Necromancy. He hides it and reads it in secret. He does a ritual to summon his mom's spirit that requires his blood. However, his blood isn't pure due to the basilisk venom and the ritual is corrupted. Lily's ghost comes back bound him not as a mentor, but as a sexual slave. She is mostly a ghost that no one else can see, but she can form a physical body.
51) Harry learns that the reason she went from hating James to loving him was the result of a binding ritual. He is disgusted by his father, and sets out to find a way to go back in time. He goes back, but only in time to interrupt it. Lily is all ready to be bound, so Harry has no choice but to bind her to him instead.

Harry/Arianna
52) Classic Dark!Dumbledore is controlling Harry's life and restricting his freedoms. When Harry gets possessed in 5th year, it breaks the barrier between him and the horcrux in his head, as well as the binding on his core. The horcrux mixes with him and corrupts him. When Dumbledore tries to threaten Harry by threatening his friends, Harry uses his new power and knowledge to create a super powerful time turner. He goes back in time to when Arianna was still alive. He takes pictures of himself with her and counter-threats Dumbledore. DD gets furious but doesn't have the power to match. He backs down and tries to look like he is helping Harry. Secretly, he tries to get Snape to brew potions that would make Harry want to have sex with the first girl he sees, as well as bind him to that girl so that he couldn't even touch another girl without his magic harming him. He planned to have Ginny deliver the spiked food. Dobby, bound by his master's magic, has also gained a darker side. He is listening to the plot, and informs Harry. When Ginny delivers the food, Harry stuns her, and takes the food with him to the past. He eats it, and then rapes Arianna. He records the entire thing and uses it to break DD's mind.
53) When the spells hits Arianna during the three-way duel, it sends her forward in time to a interrupt Harry and Luna in a private celebration of Sirius's new freedom. Luna thinks the best way to cure her insane mind would be to bind it to theirs and let their minds merge. With their Marriage Contract, Harry knows he would have to marry Luna eventually, as well as take a 2nd wife. The binding cures the madness and Harry has two wives. Arianna is sickened by what she learns of Harry's life under DD's thumb and helps Harry to discredit him completely.
53) Arianna was turned into a vampire the night before the duel. Her powers come to her after she is buried, as well as cure her madness. She watches Albus grow into a Pawn Master. Something happens, she is out of the picture for a while. She returns during Harry's 4th year. After everyone doesn't believe him, she approaches him and reveals her past. She becomes a secret ally. May have Hermione on his side to make it H/Hr/Ar. She may turn them into vampires.

(rant)
With the books, movies, and fanfiction, the Dursleys rarely get portrayed in any kind of positive light. They might be outright physically or mentally abusive, but they are not nice to Harry. With that kind of upbringing, I can't imagine why Harry would have a quick temper, or respond to name-calling and verbal taunts at all. He would have had to deal with them his entire life and unless he's as thick as Ron, he would have realized at some point that all of that only holds power over him while he reacts to it. Everyone loves to write a SuperPowerful!Harry or a Smart!Harry, but they always give him anger issues. I don't understand it.

- We know that Sirius was able to buy a broom for Harry after he broke out of Azkaban. Why couldn't he order food for himself? Why live off scraps? He could write a note saying that he is a special delivery dog. He could put some money in a pouch with the note and deliver to the some food place in hogsmeade. They would take the money, give him the food to 'deliver' and bam. Hell, if he could order a broom for Harry, he could order better clothes, a nice bed, some showering supplies, a razor for a haircut, etc.

Pet Peeve: People that change the names for dumb reasons no reason at all. Harry is never referred to as Harrison, Harold, etc. Lily is never referred to as Lilly, Lilith, etc. Just because the name *can* be a short version of a longer name doesn't mean it has to be. Grimmauld Place is not hard to spell. It's one thing if it is 'discovered' that Harry is actually just short for something, and he continues to use Harry. It's quite dumb for him to discover his name Harold and then he never uses Harry again. He's been using Harry for his entire life. He has no reason to stop using his name, and by default, he will still use it anyway. I mean, just break down Harrison. Harri-son. Harry-son. It's more of like the middle name he would give his kid.

Another thing I don't understand: why does everyone love to make Hermione ignorant about House Elves? I realize JKR did it, but she also messed up in many spots in her own story. In her first year, Hermione was researching every famous wizard and witch just because she wanted to learn. In her second year, she was the only one to pull the clues together that the monster was a Basilisk. (Although even with limited information, isn't that kind of obvious?) After all that, why would she be one that just blindly thought all elves needed freedom without any research?

Another rant: paragraphs. Holy shit. How hard is it to press enter every so often? I know I'm not supposed to expect the highest quality writing from fanfiction. That's fine. I know writers could be as young as 12, to as old as 80 or more. That doesn't excuse having terrible spacing. Paragraphs help you organize ideas. They help organize the structure. They give the reader break points. In class, teachers will tell have students read a story and switch off after every paragraph. Having 20 sentences back to back is an instant story rejection.

On a similar though, whenever you switch between two characters who are talking, there is a no paragraph. Period. There's no exceptions. You don't make 4 people talk and then mash it together and expect the reader to understand.

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Standard Disclaimer: I do not own Harry Potter or any other character mentioned in the Harry Potter books.