Very good story so far, hoping you find the inspiration to continue it soon

It's a common misconception in fanfiction that when creating horcruxes Voldemort split his soul in half each time. In the canon it's never specified how much of a soul goes in one, only a "part" of it. If that part is only a small sliver or half, it's never confirmed.

I await the next chapter. This is good.

Very good story. Please continue.

I'm still gonna try to read it but... you have commited the crime of for whatever reason in a crossover have Harry explain his entire life story to a complete stranger within the first hour for no apparent logical or believable reason. That's not how life works. And it doesn't make your fic better, on the contrary.

You started of so well though... with the recruitment scene. But then once on the ship Harry lost his entire mysterious persona so quickly.

no offense but you really should have just left this blank and just gave us another chapter before you put this one on hiatus there's such a curse on making chapters Author notes that eventually kills stories

Ngl I am disappointed as I do love this fic, but as you have decided to back away from it rather than quit I'm sure I can live with that

Nope

Great. Another "muse" issue. So glad it's being replaced with something I don't care about. Oh well.

So why didn't Harry just transform into his dragon form? He could have breathed fire onto the drake and help smash the statues.

Excellent fic. I may have questioned the amount of supplies they bought, but the story is great. Everything flows together well. Yes, Harry is very powerful but it well explained and justified in the story. For me the most annoying thing is when either people nerf their characters after powering them up or when they have them gain powers for reasons with no believable justification. None of that happens here and on top of that the characters are well written and seem real.

You seem to really need to do some work on your math. It's as if you pull numbers out of the air and have no justification for them. There is no way it should take a month to sail from Malaysia to Japan. Even at 9 knots they'd get there in just under two weeks.

4 million galleons in memory cards? $20 million dollars in memory cards? Do you even realize how many that would be, especially since in that quantity they would not be paying or buying from a retail store?

1 million galleons in food and potions supplies to teach two students? Again, do you even have an idea of how much food you would get for 5 million dollars? Potions supplies are just for teaching so no super rare ingredients. These are the kind of supplies two students would need for 7 years at Hogwarts.

Where are you getting all these numbers? Based on what you've told us in the fic so far the numbers you use seem absurd.

Please update

Please update soon

I like it please continue