This ended very well, not tied up in a bow, but rather giving us a solid foundation to believe they can build upon. Thanks!

A bit messy, especially with what amounts to the murder of seven cops. Not sure how you could have done that differently, other than to have her defeat them and then memory charm them.
A solid story otherwise.

This has taken a much more detailed, intriguing turn than I had expected!

Nice story about a rare pairing :)

Great story.

"Now, how would you like to die?"

That is going to forever be one of my favorite Fleur portrayls

Started off really nice... in my opinion, the end kind of got just the smallest bit depressing... I guess I find it sad when I see characters of adventures end up having to conform to some sort of normal life and question what they want to do or what their lot in life is... but nice story

Wonderful Harry/Fleur fic, I really wish it would be longer. One of my favorite pairings.

that was a good story a lot of fun to read and had so much action in it as well.
Draco122

Nice story. Thanks for sharing

A delightful short piece.

Well done.

Glad I checked this out.

Rev

You really are good at telling alot by telling very little.

I think its because this little story is focused on the beginnings of the relationship between Harry and Fluer rather than say the courtship, or the relationship itself.

Either way short or long its satisfying.

Rev

Yknow

I dont quite understand why the Fluer/Bill ship annoys me. Foe that matter all canon ships annoy me.

Top of the list being Ron and Hermoine followed by Remus and Tonks and Harry Ginny.

This feels natural without the entire back story. I can kinda see in my head the fights and triumphs during the training.

Rev

Oh ho!

Interesting!

The idea of Harry learning to control extra power gained by whatever means from Fluer cause they are similar in style is new. Kinda a mouth full but you get the gist hopefully.

I lurves me some Helacur. Quite partial to many of the older women in the HP universe.

Rev