Really good fanfic. Too bad life happens. Thanks for the sweet read. Hopefully the rest of your time gets better.

Well I hope not! The story is titled Veela Life Debts. So if a Harem is to be, then it should be Veela woman.
Thanks for the chapter. And this is an interesting read.

The writings are mess. Too much jump between scenes, just a dozens of sentences then jump to another scene, then repeat.

Un Fantástico Comienzo!
Me Encanto

I must say I'm impressed and that takes a lot of skill.

Why do so many people have fleur disfigured I understand oh she was kidnapped because she was a Veela, cliche but whatever but the fact that they always have her physically scarred because of it is off-putting and demented, and does not add depth to a story.

the "We are your shadows we go where you go." Line always creeps me out

Best part is Germany requesting Britain to sit down and shut up

Don't act like the French Revolution was a good thing

Oh my god Binns teaching something other than the goblin rebellions

I've said it before but I'll say it again, this is a terrible cliffhanger

Yeah this had promise but fell flat for me.

Seeing as the last update was in 2013, I'm going to assume this abandoned, deliberately on the edge of a ritual cliffie. Ur an asshole for that

I wish Harry was a bit more mature sadly it's canon Harry so we're screwed hopefully he grows up a bit

When will you update