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Cwhit930 chapter 4 . 2/16 A nice short story. A new world of knowledge and fun for Harry to explore. Thanks for the share |
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 4 . 11/3/2019 What an odd story... |
arata7kasuga chapter 4 . 7/11/2019 Hmm. Appolline may be a queen of one Race but that doesn't maker her a queen of all. Why would she try pulling rank over other entities that don't belong to her? |
arata7kasuga chapter 3 . 7/10/2019 I mean, to a magical person, two years is nothing at all. I could easily see Katie and Harry as a couple at any stage of canon aside from year 1. That aside..the story is weird, in an interesting, not at all bad way (aside from what I mentioned last chapter). |
arata7kasuga chapter 2 . 7/10/2019 The story went from extremely good and loaded with potential to cringey cliche real fast. .-. |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 4 . 6/9/2019 Such a fun story. And dream come true for Harry. Death by snu snu. |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 2 . 6/9/2019 See, they had a grand old time. I'm curious what the final score got too. Did it reach five digit numbers? |
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 6/9/2019 I love it when he gets all independent like. And when Tonks is on side, she is great fun. Looks like those three are in for a fun time in Veeland. |
FromTheUnknown chapter 1 . 7/12/2018 Well that escalated quickly..My god there was no warning, backstory or anything really leading up to why Ron did what he do or why he wasn't invited.. |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 1 . 4/9/2018 Quite enjoyable Epilogue would be nice |
SlytherinPrincess1122 chapter 1 . 11/28/2017 Fleur is actually a quarter veela when her wand was being weighed (inspected) ollivander said it had veela hair. Fleur stated it was her grandmother's and men cannot be veela so her mother was half veela. Seeing as her mother has to have married a man or become a disgrace which I doubt fleur would have to be a quarter veela |
agentinfinity chapter 4 . 6/8/2017 Most excellent! |
Bronze chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 Yeah know, one of these days some author is going to have Harry stand up and ask all those morons in the Order of the Burned Squab point blank " For how many years have all of you kept me in prison? " Of course they'll deny it loudly as they refuse to acknowledge that under Bumblemore that was exactly what they were doing. Then should Harry point out that every single one of them pointedly ignored the beatings, starvation and mental abuse he suffered at the hands of all three Dursley's, they'd turn right around and deny that as well. Though it may not seem so, this does have barring on this story. For sixteen years Bumblemore has had absolute control of Harry Potter's life. So as I see it, Harry escaping their control and taking it back for himself is just too damn bad for the Burned Squabs. Though, you can be sure when Harry, Hermione and Gabrielle return for Bill and Fleur's wedding they will tell Harry where he's to live, when and where he can go and how many Order members MUST go with him. I wonder what the plan is for after Harry kills the Dork Load? They still plan to dictate Harry's life for him? |
Runecutter chapter 2 . 8/27/2016 Chevalier is a knight (or horseman, rider). A Prince would be "prince" or "dauphin(e)". I haven't found encercle in the dictionary instead it says just cercle and de le is conflated to du, so it should read "Le cercle du prince" or "Le cercle des princes" as you have not used the apostrophe to show if you mean "the prince's circle" or " the princes' circle", French uses similar capitalization rules as English so there appears only one caps in the whole name. Weeeelll... I kind of like the descriptions of Harry and Hermione growing, healing and coming to terms with the situation. What i not like is the whole Veeland setting. Too smooth, flawless, cutesy... feminine. It seems and reads unbalanced and clumsy. There is for example NO explanation why a normal human being would even be ABLE to learn "Veela-Magic". after all they are a pretty special branch of humanity with their fairy and draconic heritage... and why is it only described as more perfect and beautiful than canon magic? That's boring and unrealistic. Right now the only real problem is that Harry is the meat in a soon to come veela orgy-feast and a lot of stunningly attractive girls want him to put a bun in their oven... other than that and a few painful moments with the correction potions nothing happens that hinders or slows them down, no obstacles to surpass, nobody taking offense at their presence on Amazon Paradise... that does not a story make. |
Runecutter chapter 1 . 8/27/2016 A bit much love of the sillier fandom tropes like "filthy rich" and "veela princesses" but an entertaining, amusing and very readable fic. I also thing the girls are a bit too accepting right away, actually Ginny's "I would never want to share" seems the most honest and natural response to the bomb they've just thrown between these kids... And i don't quite get Fleur having her partake in the preparations for Harry's harem later on... wasn't she flashythinged to forget she wants to be one of Harry's girls (or rather the only girl of his)? The reaction to Tonks trying to bully him into obedience otoh was glorious and that she turns around and accepts his logic and retells his points to the order of the headless chickens was great too. All in all a very promissing start into this fic. Only must you use the word banish that way? I do not know why fanfics so often get it wrong, in the Potter books there is a clear difference... Banish is definitely the official name for a "shoving" spell (IIRC there is no canon incantation but some fics used "depulso", might come from the video games or be fanlore, IDK) as in "the opposite of summoning" ("accio"), if you want to let waste disappear the word is "vanishing" it. |