Uhhh...

Great little fic. And a brilliant ending too. We even get Molly shafted as well. Superb.

This story started out promising, but quickly became rushed. Perhaps it would have benefited from another chapter or two.

I like the story but dont understand why every other Fluer story had Hermione in it same thing with Luna? Fleur can pretty much stand on her own meh

Lol they got the show of a lifetime didn't they?

Harry Potter!i need to speak to u right this instant!You were supposed to marry Ginny'!You as hole fucking idiot

great one-shot,

Er, I would have enjoyed this if there had been significantly more buildup to actual romance. As it is, Fleur basically gets Love Potioned by her "Veela nature" into abandoning the man she loves and jumping on Harry and Harry gets tied down and screwed by a rabid Veela. I'm not sure where the "romance" is there.

This could be expanded into a good fic if there was at least a thousand words (if pure summary) of buildup concerning Fleur ***voluntarily*** leaving Bill and romancing Harry, but as it is, there's no difference between the Fleur/Harry part and a Love Potion plotline in fast-forward. Except that there's no (deliberate) perpetrator here, as there is in Love Potion plotlines, so one just feels sorry for everyone involved.

Good luck with your future fics.

Just love story so far, Can't wait for the next update

Lol Ron went flying through the window hehe

very interesting one-shot :D

jaja este tipo de deuda de vida tampoco esta mal! jaja fe interesante! :D

I really don't like these kind of story's if she know about the bond why didn't she tell him in gof she's veela she knows what bonds mean and how was she abol to sleep with bill with the bond

lol

Lol.