Reviews for Harrison Evans & the Hogwarts First Year
Guest chapter 16 . 7/16
Unless Albus was standing in the shadows watching as Lily and Tom had their little showdown, there's no way he could know what happened between them.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16
The whole "Harry feels like he has to save the stone he'd never heard of before" bit was a huge JKR plot fail because there's absolutely no reason for 11/12-year-old-kids to give a damn about it all and that's assuming they, alone, of All The Other Students in the school, managed to piece even little bits of "the plot" together much less put it ALL together...unless compulsion charms were applied and plot arcs literally shoved into their faces (SuddenlyAppearingMirrors, anyone?).
Guest chapter 14 . 7/16
...because Albus is a manipulative f'cking moron?
Guest chapter 10 . 7/16
...like Harr'ison couldn't just BUY another wand if he lost his to Draco...
montanoaries9 chapter 16 . 6/23
haist how stupid all that hiding and whatnot and you just destroyed it like this luckily you dont make a sequel to this stupid fic
Pointer3109 chapter 12 . 5/12
Never, ever let another player complete a set of properties without doing the same yourself.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17
BTVS?
Guest chapter 17 . 11/16/2019
This was so much fun and made a lot more sense than cannon. All the characters were more likeable and relatable too. Good job.
eragon95159 chapter 17 . 9/23/2019
Continue and update with next parth. Make Harry to to gringons claim Potter heritage and change officialy his surename asi goblins to meet with goblin healer and when goblin healer scan Harry find Soul shard is removed from Harry by ritual Harry ask goblind about rituál that make genes from his mother become dominant and he look as boy verziou his mother because procese of transformation is wery slow harry wear bandana king tíme because his father black unruly hair fall out and in time slowly grow hair his hermione sturdy to become healers and try upgrade healing with nonmagic/mundane Evans and granger families go Visit new zeland and accept they style be most time barefoot(they probaly change hogward remove racism blood purity and more All students become most tíme barefoot because bare skin of feet soles absorb magic from ground )they in tíme find most spells is posible wandless and silent cast but wandless magic is dont learned to controll population by break they find ancient curse on house elves and Harrison buy house elf and with friends by therapy slowly they find way and break curse (elf turn into elf from Dragon age). more.
BelfryBats chapter 17 . 6/19/2019
Fun little story I hope you continue the series, it would be interesting to see how cannon diverges as time goes on.
Guest chapter 17 . 2/23/2019
Oh, man, I'd love to have read the next year's fic BUT I CAN'T FIND IT! HELP!
Guest chapter 14 . 2/23/2019
That damned mirror was a cruel trick Albus played on Harry to emotionally weaken him even further.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2019
Eh, bash away. I can't stand either Albus or Ron, and Ginny? Yeah, who wants to be around an obsessed fangurl OR her mother who inspires the drama? Ugh, Molly. Just...no.
MajinBakaHentai chapter 11 . 1/23/2019
Oi! Oi! Oi!
Latarra chapter 17 . 1/12/2019
Good story. A fun read.
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