Learn to spell. Holy shit.

I like this a lot
it's awesome :)

I would like Harry Nat just feels right both child soldiers, a normal woman could never be with Harry

a quick note to tell you that I am really enjoying this story. i also wanted to point out that instead of sending in the cavalry (a group of mounted soldiers), you sent in the Calvary (the place that Christian's believe Christ was crucified). just thought you might want to know.

Short, but very sweet. You nailed it.

Good story. I like it very much. It's fun to read. Out of all the Avengers, I've always liked Clint, Natasha, and Coulson the best.I think the Avengers will be good for Harry. The British have always been too up tight and when you're dealing Dumbledork and his half truths and manipulations, it's even worse. In case you haven't guessed, I do not like the Dumbledore character, whether in canon or fan fic, he is a total ass.
Thanks,
Ron Pate

but coulson wasn't dead
can i expect there will be sequal or series

good but kinda confused about why you suddenly started calling bolt harry. ik that bolt is harry but an explanation maybe?

other than that ur writings pretty good. makes me want to read more.

good story

I'd be interesting to see a chapter with them finding out Phil is alive, but I can understand why you left it here. it's a good ending.

and:''Coulson threatened to taze a man with a mechanical device imbeded in his chest until he was drooling. This while he was holding said man prisoner for the crime of not wanting to work with SHIELD. This imprisonment occurred after SHIELD tried to kill him and just over six months after Coulson had previously kidnapped the same man.''

eeeeeer: ''I've got a laundry list of issues with Coulson and honestly, the sweet & geeky moments rarely make up for them. See, he's bad enough throughout the movies & shows, but add in the comic tie-ins for the MCU? Oh, gods. He drops off female characters' correct titles; he kidnaps Tony & Rhodey right after the Iron Monger battle for a lecture in the guise of an EMT before trying to assume control of SI resources (he also spent the majority of that period under the assumption that Tony got away from the Ten Rings because he's a member of them and of course, the shutdown of the Weapon Division was just a smokescreen); he calls the Hulk a monster even after stating his observable actions are to protect people, especially Banner, usually by putting himself in the way; he confiscated people's research in order to keep it in SHIELD's hands instead of the general public (things like Dr. Sterns' blood duplication method); he not only authorized but actively observed human experimentation; he spent five years in charge of the investigation into misappropriated Stark Weapons tech, but apparently no other agencies were informed and steps were taken to keep the issue from becoming investigated by other people, despite SHIELD's lack of results.''

''...but if I wanted to date a red head who could kill me with her pinky toe I would have married my secondary school girlfriend'' Yes, lol. It's the reason Natasha/Harry doesn't work... Thank you very much :333

Wow. I am excited about the such AU! It is interesting. You know, I wasn't expecting Order of the Phoenix don't push him like a canon. Cool, I love it)

3rd or 4th read, and always great.