great story

I made it till here, but this is just a rewrite of the original. He's a time-traveller, he KNOWS ahead of time that Marge is going to arrive, and he sits there listening to bullshit?

Wow why not just mark your story has plagiarism since everything is literally JKR writing with minor insignificant changes. What’s the point of a fanfic if you can write your own story without copying and pasting it. Stop reading after chapter 10 since story was nothing special and you just downplay Harry and Hermione character better of deleting this story

Nope, sorry can't make it through. Can't dig that deep.

Woww nice story
Btw, do any of you know any nice hhr stories where hermione gets pregnant and hhr basically make a family and have children? THANKSSS! HARMONY FOREVER ️️

while I accept your author's notes, the fact that she literally died simply because he died in the first time line would indicate to me that his soul cannot have moved on or she would likely have died as well. So harry at least is still around in some form or another... Possibly a blood protection much like his mother's for him, but I find it hard to believe that she would still live in a timeline where they were closer then the original.

I'm not sure if they ever manage to consummate the marriage (though you did say an additional month or two had passed since they decided the time was right) what is a generally health concept at least in the Christian belief that marriage binds two souls together they are effectively one. (At least when done correctly)

And since I like symmetry, as a third and final point (I did mention three sets of three relics in a previous review did I not?)

He's Harry *Fucking* Potter (pardon my language) The-Man-who-just-wont-quit. He'll be back.

Looking forward to the next part of the series!

~Ben
(Aka: Manatheron)

PS. Kudos to Old Crow who was the main reason I heard about you!

Is it odd that while reading this chapter I immediately thought of the manga inuyasha, and the sword that the older brother weilds that cannot cause wounds?

Most major newspapers do in fact accept articles from even unknown writers if the information contained therein can be verified...
ENGLISH MINISTRY INVOLVED IN MASSIVE COVER-UP.
Would be one I suspect would catch any major publications attention... especially if there was a note from serious attached stating everything is to the best of his knowledge true, and that he's willing to take veritaserum to prove it.

Okay, I'm going to take the age of the fic in question into account here, let him having five castles is also stupidly broken... Although I do freely admit that I rather liked to you gave at least a mild explanation for the amulet being one of three treasures that predated Atlantis. I'm also kind of curious if there will be a third set of three items... 3 to the 3rd you see if you include the hollows.

it also would have made more sense to get sirus involved with draco's case. His mother was a black and sirus should be head of the black family, which means Draco should have recourse to go to him as his own father has basically threatened / disowned him.

Sirus still being guilty should be Rita's spin on him being sentenced to time already served for being an unregistered animagus... I also have a hard time believing that fudge wouldn't have found a way to spin the capture of pettigrew in his own favor. I'm really hoping that next chapter we find out Lucius stepped in or something like that... As a matter of fact I'm currently assuming that pettigrew is how Lucius found out that Harry and Draco were friends.

That amulet seems stupidly overpowered... Also something that no self-respecting adult would ever sell to an underage child...

also the kind of thing that the ministry would closely regulate if it's as powerful as its purported to be...

Don't get me wrong, I'm liking the story... But that amulet sounds as broken as the Deus ex hallows. and it should have at very least taken a massive quest to find and/or sheer unadulterated luck to trip over.

Glad you warned us. This chapter is pretty had on my suspension of disbelief... If 'the black robed figure' wanted everything unchanged that badly he should have started Harry further forward.

Lucky you to a beta so soon.

Really good story

Like you said your evil and stuff, meant to write this i guess. :(
The story is so good until they used the spell to get married then it goes downhill.
Mostly Aaaarrrghhhh... why are you destroying your own wonderful fanfic, h/hr continue to avoid there consumation till a damn freaking year later... unbelievable. People will find time or seek time and how this piece is written they would have done it. cause of the power hey would get or need. Then you have to make her alone, barren, virgin, seriously why? consumate, create a child and then the rest must she be alone..
fuck so cruel never know the wonders of consumate, child etc.. for that long.

1:bellatrix that goes through the school without being noticed doubtfull, 2: h/hr were gone already so hardly think they left stuff behind it's one thing to find hermione's hair but harry no way. and then act like them yeah isn't succesfull. this little plot was rather meaningless.
-ehm what? pointless little piece susan ant askings harry what he sees in susan?

Instead of fanfic radiant choas to respond is easier done here also.

hermione telling where harry lives, she's gone nuts would never do that not only his enemy's go after him but the press as well. meanwhile massive wizard folk come to him and he doesn't now a thing. way to go hermione
Oh right and harry sees the newspaper, how he reacts even if he did come back would be so different, he would certainly not like everybody to know at this point and if he know it's hermione it would be bad. i mean he already feels betrayed what would do this to there friendship/love?

Hermione destroys and kills so unlike her, harry learns about it with the betrayel wouldn't he be wary/distrustful/stricking with fear how she changed?
and then with all those mysteriouse fates/destiny creatures, it's uncertain of they have future together, will there consumation ever happen.. :(

hmmm both has gone back and changes things but both are also different, hermione still in love but harry still needs to learn it so odd. too much to think about.

love the reference