Hello. I quite enjoyed this fanfic, though I do have a few complains. Why did you make the whole Weasley family, except Arthur and Bill, sound like monsters? I am pretty sure you are one of these petty fanfic writers that hate Jk Rowling's pairings. I will only agree with you and all this when you are able to create such and amazingly magical world as she did. Then I will listen to your opinion. Plus, what’s all this lordship stuff? Harry isn’t cut out for that. Except all of this, the fanfic is okay, really.
You really need to perfect your writing skills. I am seeing tons of grammatical errors, such as not putting commas when supposed to or not writing the words right. Are you even English? Because you definitely don’t sound like it. Please, those errors make you lose audience and that story makes people see you as a terrible person. Please change these things.

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A gun? Bruh...

I really liked that the marriage was because of such sweet promise. However, I was not so fond of the Ron/Ginny letters, they were a bit over the top.
I do find interesting that the supposedly trump card was found so quickly in the story. It may seem too early, but at least he may have time to actually learn how to use it, rather than be able to use it the first time with no issues.
Thank you for sharing this story.

This appears to be one of those stories where everything goes right for Harry. Even though we all love Harry, it makes for a boring read if there is no true adversary. People who are extremely wealthy and powerful usually join the ranks of of the disliked. Rowling made him struggle and that's why we loved him. He was constantly challenged and technically not as strong. But with good friends and love and sheer dumb luck he prevailed. This Harry just breezes by. Me no likie.