First of all, what the heck is an Aura? Are you idiotic or what. It is aurors or autor not you idiotic one. Second why the hell you kill the credibility of the story by using a good Snape, are you child or rapist lover. Anyway if at least you had fixed most of the grammar an correct nouns it could be save but as it is dead the story is bad and you.

I feel like this OC was way to much. And way to fast. He just got pissed at Daphne's dad trying to sell her and now he's all ok with his grandparents doing pretty much the same thing. Even if money wasn't involved it still took away their choice and I don't see this Harry being all that thrilled about it.

Beyond that, I've never understood why authors have this weird train of though that Harry's name would change if he was head of more than one house. He would be Lord Harry James Potter. That's it. That is his status as lord and his name. He doesn't get more last names. He simply gets the ability to identify himself as Lord Potter, Lord Black, Lord Perevell, ect. Not Lord Potter-Black-Perevell... That just sounds stupid on top of being wrong. The only time this would change would be if he was adopted, blood or otherwise, and given the chance to legally change his name if he so chose.

Did a great job in your first FF you are going in my favorite and follow list

Great story

That was beautiful.

Very interesting story! I’ve never seen multiple wives so normal. Loved it

This must be the most mentally handicapped author in this section of FF, because this is the only cause that would make one of them imagine lessons on necromancy at Hogwarts.

I see you like Neville. Good on you. Even better, go fuck yourself. The Luna Neville pairing comes out of nowhere, and the introduction of an OC from nowhere to be Harry's 4th wife, when it could easily have been any of the many girls from Hogwarts (or hell, even Luna or Padma). But since it's your story, then fuck you asshole.

GB is bbn

Is Ravenwood from the Indiana Jones movies?

That was a very sneaky cliffie! I expected a marriage contract but you kind of snuck that in

How about a male Potter to continue the potter line?

Not bad, excellent so far. Too bad it's only 17 chapters. You should get a "Beta", to help with editing and adding, chapters.

You and your shitty side pairings. You seems to like fatass chickenshit Neville. The only reason he acts brave is because he copies Harry. A coat tail rider, almost as bad as that dumbfuck faggot Ron.

This was great! I really love how close with Neville Harry got!