A fitting ending! I enjoyed your story of the rewriting of Wizarding history. Your portrayal of Harry growing into his role of natural born leader was fascinating and believable! Hope you return to write more HP FF!

I like the fact that you have the 6 of them on the horcrux hunt rather than just the three. Makes for better balance and explains the deep connections.

Oh wow, this was a fab first chapter! Harry so oblivious, Hermione blaming herself, Ton being understanding... looking forward to reading the rest!

I think piece de resistance would be more fitting than coup de grace.

But then again, I've never written a fan fiction story.

Harry, with motions by now smoothly automatic, winds up and with a swing that would send a ball over the fence, uses his bat to reduce his alarm clock to its component atoms.

A 10kmx20km lake?
In the UK?

AhYup.. good resertch there, mate.

Firstly, I want to congratulate and thank you for bringing such a wonderful piece of literature to thousands of Potter fans. What a brilliant storyline, and your writing skill is to be commended! Thank you! I also have a question, if you ever see this, was Lunas Date of Death a typo, or did something heinous befall her, like her mother before her? I'm intrigued! Thank you again, lorlorgrace

Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it with us.

Matt,
Thank you for choosing to wrap this up. I believe this would have been a great story, if you had followed your original plan. Part 1 was superb. The development of Harmony was comfortably paced without the annoying drawn out angst of many of the "Harry and Hermione get together as adults" fics.
I knew that the plan had changed, because I can do math. The end of part 1 was far past 1/3 of the way through the chapters, so I was emotionally prepared for the abrupt ending.
Still this is a very good story and I agree that it was better to complete it this way than to refuse to deviate from the outline and never finish. Besides, there is no rule that says that you can't come back in the future, finish the story the way you originally intended, and post the story as you originally intended. I believe that this would generate many smiles in HP fandom.
Thank you again. I truly enjoy your writing.
O'D

Holy Crap! "Brilliant but Scary" on steroids. Very cool chapter.

I hope that fact that "angst" isn't in the genre means that this is just a step and Harry figures this out in the next few chapters.

I quite enjoyed this story, but it's ends so abruptly that's really too bad. Like of course the mentioning what they did in the future information.
But i really would have like to read h/hr wedding and coming of there children etc..
And even if it's just 6 years it's still to long a time between hermione's death and harry's, it's sad but at least short comparising with other fanfics witch 100 years or so.
-And why has luna died so young?

Outstanding story, I'm glad to have found it and enjoyed the time spent reading it. It seems the author is no longer around, but I'll be interested in reading more like this from them if they return!

What an awesome ride!

Well... not a bad wrap up I guess. It seemed a bit rushed given how the pase of the story was going then suddenly this, but, you did give warning it was a quick and dirty close to the story at the beginning of this chapter.