| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Unexpected Changes |
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   Godless Turtle chapter 3 . 7/24 arn't 12 million galleons a bit too much? Considering that 1 galleon is about 5 bucks, thats 60 milion! :D The wizarding community is rather small and I don't think that they have such a large quanitiy of money/gold available since they trade with real cash and not computer generated numbers, of all the money in the world only about 1-2% is actually real paper or coin, the rest exists only as data. (I know that I am not accurate, but still close to the truth) Yeah, I am being a annoying smartass right now |
| Kushka chapter 16 . 5/11 Great story |
| elgaucho chapter 16 . 4/29 You portrait yourself, and come off, as terrified of being cliché -trite, unimaginative. As such, you put on a straight-jacket and become a Percy Weasley. You might consider keeping some of those clichés, and get innovative within their perceived banality. I mean, you are writing about magic, in a fictional environment, already away from cannon; anything really goes, and some of that triteness is quite enjoyable. From your writing I deduce English is not your first language. May I point out your grammar, at times, is more distracting than your obsession to avoid clichés? I hope you take my criticism positively, 'cause give as such. Thanks for your story. |
| WeisseHex chapter 15 . 3/31 Really, Lucius? He died! And Amelia knows! |
| WeisseHex chapter 9 . 3/31 On is Dumbledore jealous? |
| WeisseHex chapter 1 . 3/30 I really DO hope you will live with Sirius for a long time, Harry Potter, dear! |
| MavtheMustang chapter 1 . 2/13 Really fucking hate Hermione |
| Traveler301 chapter 7 . 2/9 I think the way that you're writing this story is great. To me, it's not fluff but, necessary to understand this Harry. Thanks, Ronn Pate Traveler301 |
| aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 14 . 12/26/2019 Kind of disappointed that Harry was caught so effortlessly and by Umbitch of all people... |
| aratakasugatrinity7 chapter 5 . 12/24/2019 Harry is related to black by blood tho?Also, love the way you described Daphne, she sounds very pretty and also nice. Also |
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/23/2019 should not be able to use portkey in hogwart |
| Matt chapter 5 . 10/14/2019 Vision has nothing to do with the nerves in your eye, so regrowing them would not have any effect. How good (or bad) your vision is is based on the SHAPE of your eye, and of your cornea. This is how laser eye surgery works. It actually reshapes the cornea of your eye to correct your vision. If you're going to do it magically, at least do it the right way. |
| Larry63 chapter 13 . 9/28/2019 classic mistake: Rule 9: Never go anywhere without a knife |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/19/2019 Hahaha, I read your bio. You've come a long way, mate. Cheers! |
| TurtlesTale chapter 14 . 8/25/2019 why didn't he banish the cauldron volde was in or untie the ropes? |
