So it's basically Harry Potter: The Harem Anime.

you know luna is sane and harry is crazy. oatmeal raisin cookies are way better than chocolate.

I guess you have Angelina and Cho having 1 child each to reach the 66 total? Good Harry Harem story btw.

I don't comment often, but I just read a Phineas & Ferb joke/ reference in a Harry Potter harem fanfic. Thankfully, somehow Reality is accommodating this unusual Event. You won't be hearing me question or complain. This was hilarious. Well done Dear Author!

And now back to our regularly scheduled programming...

Just re-reading this story I almost completely forgot about. That said I just have to comment here and I can't say I ever thought of Hanah as fat. Certainly not in the movies and while fan fiction and the books described her a bit "plump", I always took it as more of a curvaceous figure than a belly way.

That said "fat shaming" is a thing, but so is "beauty shaming". It's almost like being thin and physical fit is looked down upon more these days. Plus there is actual medical reasons to not be hugely over weight. A couple pounds here and there isn't much, but 50 is not healthy in any way. Add to that if your already fat at the age 15 or so, it's not looking good for your long term prospects.

That Hannah in this story seemingly loves junk food and piles of sweets isn't exactly making her "weight" a simple matter of genetics and bad luck either. Never mind the fact magic probably makes being fat fairly easy to fix. With conjured food if nothing else to supplement your diet...

Ït ended in too many children and too many wives. Sometimes it felt inadequate in his spending times with girls. On the other hand, it had a solid quirk of Luna holding the story together. It was fun, light, and not serious.

The only thing I would criticize is that there were not many hugs and cuddling, waiting for some arbitrary guidelines of what touch and whatnot felt a bit flat.

A self governing Harem, not bad.

Wa...wha... whaaaaat... Luna, sweet Luna, you are a sweet angel 3

Great story. I read it from start to finish. I like binge reading fanfic stories. I am going to see what other stories you have written now. I really like the Luna character in the story. I like your writing style a lot.
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Victor

... Cursed #'s, bad numbers, No! Why such bad omen?

Good story, seriously loved your Luna.

You laid the fat acceptance virtue singling on way to thigh, especially considering Hannah isn't even fat in in cannon, and this is coming from someone who likes big girls

noice

Sigh... You are a very talented author that's for sure, but in my opinion, you made a mistake by making Luna soo godlike. I've basically forced myself to get to the 10th chapter because of how pointless and meaningless this whole story is. I mean, is there a point in reading this in Harry's POV when Luna is the real protagonist? When we know how this is going to end? When we know there won't even be any major conflicts simply because Luna happens to be an actual God? For those reasons and more, I can confidently say that this is one of the most pointless and empty stories I've ever read in my entire life...

While I haven't completed reading the book, I couldn't resist writing this review.

Great , just Great
The lengths to which you must have gone to write the random but completely connected coincidences is great.

A beautiful book (read so far )
:)