Awesome story! I had a fun time reading it!
Thank you for sharing your writing and talent,

CrazyCrookshanks13

I love it It's... real

Not too impressed as of yet.
First there is this really weird idea to have to "improve" a magical world by declaring muggle fighting superior. Instead of just improving on the magical world, authors feel the need to completely outdo it, which seems pretty silly to me. Why do anything in Harry Potter's world if you do not like wand wielding and fantastic beasts?
Secondly the characters of Harry and Lisa read like they are 16 or 18, NOT 11. But then it already starts with a "baby" Harry that thinks like a 5 or 7 year old not a 1 year old toddler. While there might be some opportunity to make a small amount of pocket money even at age eleven by helping around house and garden, it's not "building a wardrobe and buying a full room's furniture levels" in the UK, there are labor laws and for most things you really can earn well with ages are restricted to 14 and above and even then only with approval of the guardians... Not sure if this would work in the USA in the 1990s, but in Europe it's simply impossible.

The eidetic memory feels like a good gadget to build a story about, in this chapter though it is not really well used, one appearance to bring in the well known origin story and one mention in passing do not make a good story-device out of something. Show, don't tell. Have Harry repeat vietnamese sentences his Sensei told him once with perfect inflection. Give Lisa some things she asks for for her homework recited perfectly from Memory. Put him in school when his homework was "mislaid" by Dudley but give his presentation perfectly from memory... something that shows how good it is, don't rely just on having others talk about how well his memory works.

You fucking useless virgin of an Author, pls give him the fucking Talk and make him more Casanova than useless gay Harry

Master Wei didn't get a present, or some visits?

James and the Marauders became Animagi in their fifth years, not third... hope this helps, ~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean.

Hope he apologises to Ron later for his outburst, having the support of the Weasleys as well as the Bones would be helpful...~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean.

It's "Hindsight is always twenty-twenty", it's an optometry term, meaning best vision possible, not fifty-fifty, which is more of a percentage term, hope this helps...~Black Jeans-Wearing-Blue Jean.

Authors seem to love writing chapters in chapters about Harry having a shopping spree in Diagon Alley. Oddly enough, they seem to forget to ever mention again most of the things Harry ends up buying.

A bit heavy on wish fulfillment, and Harry is an irredeemable Mary Sue, but I'll keep reading and see where it goes. Harry acts and sounds like he's 30, and he has nowhere near enough testosterone at his age to build up significant musculature. Still, this might turn out okay if it's not another canon rehash.

darick Jeter

I have greatly enjoyed this story and will now look at the second. One very minor detail: Ravenclaw colors are blue and bronze not blue and silver (unless you changed them in your universe for some reason)

Some clichés, but good writing and spelling.

I really enjoyed reading this fanfic. It started a bit boring but it got progressively better and i really liked the christmas part.. it was pretty wholesome. I wish this wouldnt be a harem story but i really like Lisa Crawft and Daphne and Susan, i wouldnt be able to choose... Anyways, cant wait to read the sequel:)

What is the sequels name