Reviews for Harry Potter and the Metamorph
Epeefencer chapter 8 . 7/24
I'm not usually for matching Harry with anyone other than Ginny but I have to admit this story was rather good. I also usually think of Tonks as too old for Harry but you handled that very well. All in all an enjoyable read.
SeekerTLK chapter 5 . 7/9
David Webb... very cute reference.
The Deck Master chapter 7 . 7/7
I read Gio and though of Part 5 JoJo's and cant get the thought of Daniel Radcliffe JoJo posing out of my head.
omh666 chapter 8 . 6/19
I can't remember if I've ever read this story before. Doesn't seem that familiar. In any case, awesome read. Thank you for writing it, and what's more for posting here for us to read it.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/15
Thanks for finishing this story, was a fun read.

I found it horribly disappointing that he didn’t contact Hermione at least, after all she was always there for him, and was nearly killed for him in the DOM, and that you glossed over the reactions of the people.

I mean why would Dumbledore even believe V was finally dead without knowing the prophecy was fulfilled.

But still, it was quite enjoyable.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/14
Great chapter. And lol Hedwig though I thought the cloak was a good idea, lol
Guest chapter 2 . 6/14
“his hair had been died light brown” ... you mean to say dyed
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14
Oh god what a great ending to the chapter!
Matt chapter 2 . 6/13
You say Tonks was trained by an American. So what happened to them? Why can't they train Harry? I know for story purposes you want Tonks to do it, but you could at least throw in an explanation for the American trainer being unavailable.
Matt chapter 2 . 6/13
While I do enjoy this story, I find it very difficult to believe that Tonks is the only known metamorph in the world. In the world?! It's a big world, and even with a small magical population in most countries, there should still be at least two or three known metamorphs in the world. That doesn't include any who keep their abilities secret, of course, such as the one in DisobedienceWriter's story about the Irish school.
gabzep chapter 8 . 5/24
I hope Remus knew the truth at the end.
gabzep chapter 7 . 5/24
Got to love Hedwig!
MadManWithAHat chapter 8 . 5/18
Great story, great ending, the only thing I disliked about it was in my previous rant on chapter 2. Keep up the good work!
MadManWithAHat chapter 2 . 5/18
Love the chapter, my only beef with it is the martial arts section. Here's a rant.

In traditional martial arts, the belt system is used as a measure of both your skill and a record of your time and dedication spent in it. More and more time is required to earn your next belt ranking. It is similar to earning degrees at college; a bachelor's, master's, and doctoral all require differing amounts of time and effort. And the belt system changes once you reach black belt as well as it's a milestone and each degree requires so much more than the previous and in some cases can take years to move up a degree. Strength and skill will make take you places in martial arts but there is not skipping past levels like you can do in schools if your grades and credits are good enough.
Onto Capoeira, it is fancy and flashy but not all that useful in actual fights, as is the same with sword dancing. The addition of the dance part takes out the usefulness of martial arts. All the fancy spins and jumps are horrible and terrible things to do while fighting, they burn through stamina and provide openings for attacks. If you wanted to use a less known martial art than the ones that basically every one knows about (ie. kung fu, karate, taekwondo, jujitsu, muay thai, kickboxing, etc) then why not choose one that's actually good? Some examples are Krav Maga, Vale Tudo, Bokator. Of course if you wanted to use it for the acrobatics then why that instead of parkour?
The Grimm Swashbuckler chapter 1 . 5/1
Wow Sonia. You read what you like. Don't read if you do not like. AT LEAST FIX YOUR GRAMMAR DAMMIT! Anyways, I see no issues with this. Honestly, it's your choice to be a slut or not. I find nothing wrong with being a slut. Hell. You're just being sexist. A guy with many girls has a harem. A girl with many sexual partners? No no no. She's a slut. Hypocrite much? Honestly this is a very well written story. It asks the what-if question 'If Harry were a metamorph...' and explains it wonderfully.
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