A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

you know crabbgoyle reminds me of abbotCostello gunny as all get out. crabb is obviously the smarter of the two. and he's mute

This is a confusing story that kinda reads like a run-on sentence, with no indications something's changed.
They are six, and then suddenly they're on the train.
They are getting into plot, and then it goes to another perspective entirely, throwing off what the author wanted to say.
And of course the plot, which is actually good mostly, except changes aren't carried over, like the Malfoy's divorce, Narcissa is talking about how she is glad that Lucius doesnt have influence over her son, and yet he is still a jerk who can't think to save his life.
Eh, I'm not in suspence anymore, and I'm bored of the story.

The lack of line breaks really annoys me but it's too late change anything now that we're 13 years in the future...

Six year old children that break into Azkaban, it’s nice to know that is going to be a completely ridiculous story.

This is ridiculous to think Malfoy already had the villain complex at six years old. This story is actually pretty ridiculous so far.

Thanks for a great read. Now, off to see if the sequel actually materialized~

ugh...you have just achieved your goal to kill this story once and for all

Ugh.

(To say more than "ugh" would be to give this dreck more credit than it's worth.)

Surely this is a good story

This whole azkaban escaping business would be solved forever if they were just petrified or something and dumped in a hole until/unless there was ever need of them again...

Now in just disappointed "His six year old self's immaturity got the better of him"? That's a terrible forced attempt to explain a part that contributes to the plot for no reason. Plus how could he have checked for portkeys in the 2 seconds his disarmed Snape. It's not a glaring problem and im just nitpicking but it does make me wonder if Harry is going to be dumb as hell making "Childish" decisions in the future and ruining a decent story..

By the end of this chapter we know from the flashbacks that Luna is very important to Harry in the first timeline, but there is no mention of saving Luna’s Mom in the second timeline. That seems like a big oversight in the story with making Harry all of these corrections.
Otherwise, a very good and emotionally powerful chapter.

This is obviously a stupid and mentally retarded version of Harry :/ at 6 years old unless you god mode him, he shouldn’t have the power to make use of those blueprints not to mention no wand

is he 26 years old? really? always seems happy to make an MC look stupid. why not leave immediately after getting the wormtail. and finally it seems that the azkaban ward is cheaper to buy than the Weasleys