this was good but you made me cry with them watching from a distance

We use refrigerator occasionally, but we mostly use fridge -

This is excellent! Definitely one I'm going to binge read

A fine story had potential for more. The only thing to much was 2x 2 weeks in staying in the mind of voldy for real? just makes hours cause only singing without doing nothing is wortless simpel writing.

Nice work on this story. It was a enjoyment to read.

Not gonna lie, I was kinda expecting more. This seems a tad bit too small for me. Still, it was an okay read. Nicely done.

That was awesome totally loved it

Pretty damn good the epilogue felt a lot like the Superman Red Son epilogue and I like that.
For what it was Thx ;)

Did you know that there is a song that is even more annoying than and time consuming than the beer on the wall song? It's called "the song that never ends". A kids show called Lamb Chop had it. You should look it up on YouTube (they have a 10hr loop of it

the strangers name suck though

please though pointless make a sequel for this

My final thoughts on this story:
It's interesting that like Dementor149's 'Bloodbound' (with which this story has some similarities) , you have pushed Ron firmly out of the picture. Even though, a vampiric Harry and Hermione would be concerned about the reactions of their friends, I can't see them avoiding all contact with Ron and the Weasleys in general (despite what Bill asks for). Also, why no involvement with Luna, Neville, Hagrid, etc?

The scene where Harry and Hermione are out cold in a room for a fortnight... If it was really that long, did Remus and Dora get out of the house for some fresh air? Also, if I had been them, I would've been frantic to break into the room to find out what had happened to Harry and Hermione - and enlist the aid of the house elves in the process. Basically, it would've been more realistic for Harry to have been in Voldemort's head for a matter of hours - not two weeks.

What happened to Snape and Draco in the end?

The story is not bad - but after recently reading Dementor149's story, it felt rather short and light by comparison (e.g. we don't see Harry and Hermione hunt much in this tale, or experience them grappling that much with their new natures). Nevertheless, I know how much time and effort can go into these stories - so thank you for your completed story. I hope this review helps your future work.

"...You're choice." Should be "...Your choice."
'it's to early for thinking.' Should be 'too', not 'to'.
Good to see that Umbridge got a bit of what she deserved!

I presume that Remus and Dora realised that both Harry and Hermione were both vampires - but this was never made clear during their stay at Number 12, Grimmauld Place. Some detail about how they they feel about this, in conversation with Harry and Hermione would've helped.

Overall, though, the chapter was fine.

Us Brits say 'fridge' or 'refridgerator'! So you're okay on that.

However, I noticed an error here: when Lupin says "...smallest bedroom on the second story".

Firstly, the English spelling for the floor of a building is 'storey', rather than the US 'story'. And if Number 5, Privet Drive is a two-storey building like Number 4 (as in the films), then Lupin would've said "smallest bedroom on the first floor", as in the UK, the 1st floor of a building is the first floor above ground level, and not the ground floor itself!

The story itself to this point is engaging, thanks. I will read and review more later.

RMB

So Darknight's idol was Batman? If so then I'm shocked, because I COMPLETELY did not get the reference until this most recent read-through.

excellent story