I am enjoying the story, I wish you could finish it up!

Great fanfic, i loved it! Sad that its abandoned, especially at such a cliffhanger! Come on! Im sure Daph would survive but the concept of Harry being a father wouldve been fun to read.. Aghhhh please continue!

are you actually kidding me? you've abandoned the story on THAT cliffhanger?

Funny title again :p

Lol the title is funny

This is a super Harry story, lord of everything.

lol why did Harry just automatically trash his best friends for literally no reason?

Harry/Susan, please!

Wow that was intense! I hope you write more someday. Thank you for sharing

Way to finish a chapter... Hate you!
...
Just kidding...
But realy?
Whanna more!

If you could just go ahead and finish this, that’d be great.

I feel that I must say this was a reasonably good read. Though it’s unfinished, and if you’re not a masochist, you’ll likely find yourself skimming over a lot of the paragraphs, to avoid annoyance. But nice concept, and generally recovers well after each bout of annoying-ness.

I’m sorry, I shouldn’t be raging about this, ‘cause I’m sure it’ll work out in the end. Though, seriously, not everything needs a twist! You can allow the protagonist to have a clean getaway once or twice, I swear, it won’t kill you! This is specifically in relation to Macnair and the desk, but it applies to so many other aspects of this story, as well.

Ok, not done, that bloody vanishing charm, ugh. Can’t even put into words how much this is annoying me. Honestly, close to just quitting the story just because of that. What’s the point of trying to make Harry powerful, if you never actually write him as being powerful. You just have him angrier and more righteous than everyone, without ever backing it up with a show of power.

Ok, I get the idea of wanting to add a twist to something like a duel, but no, just no. In this kind of instance we would have been happier to see Harry simply thrash his opponent. If you really wanted a twist, make it one that doesn’t have permanent consequences. This is a duel in a school after all. Ugh. Can’t describe how annoyed I was reading this.