Brilliant end to a brilliant story. I didn’t think I would enjoy this as much as the first but I was delighted to have been proven wrong.

Loved, loved, loved. I did want his scars to form the love rune at the end.

some real good shit frfr
but honestly it would've been so much better if Al was left as it was, would've made the story perfect
but that my opinion and i enjoyed both your stories immensely

that was some truely complex time travel stuff. this might be the best one on this website.

The story was beautiful, I loved it.
You do understand the true meaning of JK Rowling's famous book series and the messages it tries to convey.
And some of the criticism I had are gone but the others strengthened.
I still cannot swallow sadistic mass murder in Azkaban...you cannot just write it in in order to delete important "evil" characters from the story and make everyone pretty much ignore it, like it didn't happen at all. My criticism (that I wrote on part 1 in detail) still stands. That sort of act should have serious consequences!

Emily story had potential but it was extremely rushed and I assume you put it in because Cursed Child is now considered canon? I did not like it, it's basically "btw my dad is Voldy but I always loved you bye". Hated that part.
The sequel was not as good and more rushed than part 1. It seems that once upon a time you wanted to end it on a cliffhanger, before you came to your senses. I am glad you did because cliffhanger is the most terrible way to end any book or fan fiction.
But then you have written the ending and it's actually not...great. Nothing I have read makes sense, it almost seemed like 1st april joke with both Emily's reveal and Voldy's potion. Obviously quite rushed, it was confusing to read.
I honestly believe that in order for the ending to be powerful, Al should have died young, either from the or from too much time travel. It would have been a bittersweet ending...
And Emily ending up with Al should have been more than a few sentences...

Regardless, I thank you for writing this story. The reason why I write my criticism in such detail is because I love this story so much. And just like after reading a great book, I am sad to see it ending...this might be my favourite fan fiction of all time.

OMG, I just saw that you finished this! Fantastic!

Thank you for not leaving us hanging. I loved the symmetry of the modified ritual even if that part did feel a little rushed.

:)

what a couple stories you have written very different and i have read about 1000 stories of fan fiction

HMMMM not sure about this

I'm a bit confused that Harry and Ginny already know about the Curse in this chapter, when nobody had the chance to explain that in the last? A bit rushed, I think. : Otherwise it was beautiful as always 3

Holy crap I don’t think I’ve sworn so much while reading a fanfic before. This was a crazy whirlwind of a story, parts I and II, and it was freaking amazing. Your plot is unique and brilliant, and your writing is a incredible. Very impressed

Thanks. Interesting concepts ...

Yay, you finished it! Thanks so much for coming back and finishing it!

I absolutely love your writing style! You have stayed true to the characters that we all love. Thank you for finishing the story and giving us closure!