For a bit there, I thought you were talking about "AdVenture Capitalist", where your first "investment" is a Lemonade Stand. Next is either a Car Wash, or Pizza Delivery. Fun game for an idle capitalism simulator. Seriously, it's all about spending money to make money, while its counterpart made by the same company, AdVenture Communist is about working your way up the ranks of dictatorship, starting with buying more farmers that then produce more potatoes. Then those farmers can be used to buy Communes that produce Farmers that produce Potatoes. It goes on for a while like that.

Sigh... this would have been sooo much more awesome if it was MA rated.

A polyglot still has to LEARN the language. They are just more emotionally invested in it. Allspeak would have been a better alternative.

Magic is all about intent. Cho did not intend to become a slave. McGonagall did not intend to witness, and she didn't even witness the signing, the signing of a slave contract. Dunno wtf Harry was thinking. But the main two would be Cho and McGonagall. I understand you wanting to put a bunch of girls with Harry and that needs a certain level of des ex machina to pull off, but make it a little more believable. And I would have gone with Padma, not Cho. Cho was either complicit or a party to the bullying of Luna.

Honestly, p cool.

My overall reaction to this is a simple FUCK YOU HERMIONE. and that the Ron part at the end seems to a parody of your own fic. And really who cares? Harry has all the power in the world and is still a zero.

"Did you put in a mud-pit?"
chocolate. Luna wants chocolate

ROFLMAO! - My stomac hurts so much from reading this. I love it.

Sorry, I'm out!
When Harry starts talking like Molly w/ terms like Scarlett women on top of its repetitive nature: New girl joins, Harry's an ass about it hurting said girls feelings, accepts it but feels bad until the girls straighten him out, demonstrates how powerful he is usually by defending one of his ladies but puts up w/ getting yelled at by Hermione like he's still an 11 yr old. Next chapter.
Frankly, the last 3 chapters seem like nothing but filler and repetitive filler at that. This started so great but has steadily declined to the point where even having Tonks in the family can't save it. It's not even funny anymore.

Good one.
Harry needs to just accept the girls are there by choice and get over it. After all, how is a French citizen affected by a British law?

Shouldn't Slughorn be teaching potions 6th year?
I'm beginning to feel a bit sorry for Harry, his girls are treating him like a child and showing no respect for him.

So they stand up for one another to Malfoy, McGonagall, and Dumbledore but neither Harry or his girls say anything to Hermione for assaulting Harry over something even she said he didn't do on purpose. (nevermind the whole thing started w/ her) Than Harry gives her a present! WTF! is that! So much for feeling bad about her behavior towards Harry when the girls were facing down Dumbledore.
A truly JKR worthy plot element there. It completely ignores what came before it in order to gain a cheap laugh. Not that it was funny.
Other than that still enjoying the story.

Fun start.
One thing, you had 11 players thats 55 cards dealt out. Not including draws.
There are only 52 cards in a deck.

I was really enjoying this until the "mysterious wind" that caused a new enslavement and the plans to rape Harry. Great until then.

Just saying dracos first hand two jings and all diomands and hearts is just a pair its the loest hand in the game, it is nit all reds it has to be all hearts or all diomands cant be a mix to have a flush