I had to laugh when they called the goblin master blaster

I can't believe Albus took those points from Draco. Usually he lets Draco get away with murder, figuratively speaking. I hope his house knocks him down a peg ... or 1000! He totally deserves it.

Go, Dobby ... and Sirius! I hope Dumbledore is capable of keeping Sirius safe. Or perhaps I should say I hope he is WILLING to keep him safe. That is the real issue, isnt it?

To tell you how much I like your writing, I can only say one thing. I read all your 22 stories in 2 days haha. Great stories!

Nice story and interesting idea for their retirement
Thank you for sharing :)

Great story. At times DARK but excellent development. I hope to see more of your work.

Minerva seems more understandable now. She has been walking a tightrope for many years. Because of Dumblebutt being so manipulative, one wrong move on Minerva's part would have Dumbles pause that would have led to too many questions.
Good chapter but, of course, I'm waiting for the reappearance of Gabrielle.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I can't help but feel sad for Hermione, as has made the mostly costly mistake of her young life. Fleur having a feeling that something took place in the lake, is very interesting. Can't wait for her to talk to Gabrielle about it. lol
Thanks for great chapter,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I just read another one of your stories where Harry was shipped with Susan Bones and it seemed very right, the ship with Harry and Gabrielle is and always has been my favorite. I love your stories Jack. They always remind me of "Old Crow, or Robst, Mstg SilverDollar". Although all of you write in differently, you write stories that make your readers feel good."Broomflyer" was like that too. I have many favorite authors but, you and the others I have mentioned here are the best at making us all "just feel good".
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

I don't review often but I had to say that this is probably MY FAVORITE story on fanfic. I hadn't thought of Gabby and Harry as a ship until now. Your story had it all. I laughed and I cried and I was exhausted at work from staying up to read more. It was well written and creative. Keep up the good work!

Cheers,
Mira

One of my favorite stores. Thank you for writing it!

Hi, I don’t know if you’ll ever see this but I loved your story. I was hooked in every word from beginning to end.

Really beautiful ending, loved it:)

I find it annoying that Hermione is suddenly in the thick of things. I think it would do her good NOT to be an insider this time. She has no business "undressing Harry and putting him to bed." That job should be Fleur's, as one of the betrothed, even if ot is only technically.

I always enjoy stories where Frank and Alice are healed. This one reminds me of one of RobSt's stories, I think, in which Harry and Hermione enter the Longbottoms' minds and bring them out - "Knowledge is Power," I think. Harry's conversation with Alice sounds as if he is talking about the Horcruxes. Is that what she and Lily figured out?

Well, I don't like Dumbledore, so i think he is getting what he deserves. It is nice to see strong Minerva for a change. Lately, the stories I've read have portrayed her as a real jerk. I love seeing her take Albus down.

What happened to sweet Cedric? This one actually deserves Cho the jerk. Hannah seems to be the Hufflepuff's version of Ron. Hmmm, there's a pair!

Loved it!

I had a lot of fun with your story! Your final battle scene was intense. Quite an original idea!