I truly hope that you do a sequel to this amazing story I really enjoyed it

I love how you put the chapter I just finished reading at the end of the chapter. Enjoying this story.

The dialogue between your wish- fulfillment Gary Stu and Daphne is a bit “ bow-chicka-bow-wow”, but cheesy proto-porn with toilet-paper thin plot IS a valid style choice.

Your a fucking retard

Just a heads up, when explaining the origins of Victoria you say her mother died three years before she was born which doesn't quite add up

Slow roast Fumblemort in his office maybe? That should be good for stress relief! Now normally I'd call Fumblemort's little bird club the flaming squab but as Harry has two Phoenixes and I don't wish to be insulting to them I won't. But Fumblemort and his little club are very like what my late brother use to, Useless as tits on a bull. 99% of the time they sit around DISCUSSING what to do instead of doing it.

Well, when your own family turns on you why would you stay? James sure as hell made his feels known towards Harry. But then this isn't thee first time I've read something like this. In a similar story Harry was a squib I think. Vultureworst came when James and Lily weren't home and Harry saved his brother with a hand mirror. He reflected thee killing curse back but the mirror exploded cutting his brother. No one would believe Harry nor would they even bother to test it out. So, Harry left. No real surprise there.

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Poor quality writing, with various mistakes involving continuity, grammar, etc. I’d suggest you actually read some real books instead of fan fiction to see how it should be done.

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sorry I had to. This whole thing about children and their magical chores make no friggin sense. When magic first began appearing they wouldn't have known how to bind cores, and dont even get me started on how flawed that logic is where muggleborns are concerned.

that's a pretty lazy way of explaining the past but I suppose it works.

You incredible bastard! I bought the fake epilogue and was getting pissed! Good job! Excellent story. Well thought out and you took your time not rushing to get to the end. I enjoyed it very much and thank you for this.

9.5/10 A great somewhat dark family story. I highly recommend giving it a read.

i like how you speak with me

Oh, thanks! It was great :)
I read the whole story in a day hahaha did nothing else except to eat -reading and bath LOL