This is a great story! I definitely will be checking out your other story's!

For been a moron, you and Ron are equal, means you are stupid by simple not accepting help but what made you worst than moron is the fact that on your profile you state a lot of crap Rowling write and then you do the same thing. Snape is no hero but you make him a partial hero here, Ron is bad but you keep bring him back as something good. Just do not forget all the others crap you suppose wrote but are gone, but you leave this crap. By deleting the bad review of the crap do not make it better it just show how childish you are.

Well I was not specting the rapist been save, my fault all stupidity craps always save the rapist is part of the Moron pairing. Shit is just this crap has value you don't

So the stupidity continues, if Harry was already there why don't he at least kill some of them. And again Harry had to be stuck with the Moron. Well is clear ones stupidity reach any story the writer lower the, already low brain cells. MORON

And here the stupidity start. First Morón has no real value unless you need a buffoon so why keeping the git. Second if the ward were as good how the snachers reach them in other and small word, you mess the more less good path you had and run directly to the trash bin

Please write a sequel to this story and detail Lily’s life. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

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This is a fantastic read well done

I liked your story. Thanks for sharing it

You had a story here but made mistakes.. for one not going in depth of all sudden relationship of Harry and Hermione quickly to words marrying? such a thing you can't skip it the main focus in fanfic's.
And how they act when ron comes back to sudden all is well again please..

I've only read till Chapter 6 so far...and it's definitely not my type of story. I just wish Hermione and Harry were not too OOC, I guess. It would've been a lot more enjoyable if the main characters were more like themselves.

Great story hope to see more from you soon.

Be careful about things such as content and legalities, but an interesting start.