I did not want the story to end. Great job. I prefer this over the books and movies.

Yes I do. I love it.

The editors of The Prophet issue retractions and apologies?

Really?

I thought the thing was a satyrical and fiction publication like Private Eye and The Sun.

Well I never.

After three years of training, Harry Potter became so powerful that he could destroy anything with a single punch. He defeated every opposing force, ascended to true godhood, and All was Well.

Very nice story. The grammar was pretty good aside from commas and a few off words, but with so much writing, those types of things are bound to slip through.
I was half thinking/hoping that Harry would have used the locator spell from the second task to find Daphne. It would have been poetic that for all time he would be able to find her. Still, the whole Draco and Harry as brothers was just about as good.
You're right about action scenes. I have a horrific time trying to choreograph them to feel legitimate. You did an amazing job with the push and pull between the two and Harry's final spells to make sure Voldy stayed dead.
Also agree that continuing the story from here would be a bad idea. You'd run into the bleach effect where you have to introduce ever stronger characters to challenge Harry to generate any sort of conflict. Doing so makes things less and less believable as if such characters existed, why haven't they ruled the world long ago?
One option that popped into mind was to make Harry's growth the conflict. As Hermione warned long ago, his power may increase at a faster rate than he can control. Simple lumos causes a miniature sun and such. Race against time to dump the magic before he explodes or the like.
Anywho, you've done a magnificent job here and I hope you are proud of the wonderful story you've created.

brindani

I have enjoyed reading this story. I do wonder what happened later in Harry's life.

I've read this story once from you its personally my favorite fanfiction ever and its better than any of the books in the harry potter series, I love how you have the characters adapt to changes in the storyline to hange there personality instead of throwing it at us out of no where, I hope for a followup book on this and I would be willing to make a donation if that would help for the motivation

I hope Sirius is kept alive :(

I feel bad for saying this... But I rather you have killed Cedric and kept Remus alive the whole time ahhhhh! Please keep George and Fred alive!

I started to read this 'cos I was in the mood for an adventure yarn. Seven chapters in and am still waiting for the adventure. There are reams, page after page of it, of info dumps and tedious and largely irrelevant discussions. and no adventure. This story is really misclassified.

A good fic but it slightly disappointed due to betrayed expectation, the T rating is the vaguest of the ratings and this is the result, this was for teenagers sure but more like the 12-13 kind of teenagers, at most, there was certain naivete ,lack of realism, all the good guys never suffer any consequences from their adventures, shallowness of interaction between characters and etc that I would expect to find in books of the type, it strongly reminded me of books like "The Belgariad" or "Ranger's Apprentice" that I have read as a kid.

I was really enjoying your story. Now I’m getting more and more fed up, frustrated and angry. Your plot line with Hermione and her stupid ritual is ruining everything. Unless this ritual is actually magically effecting her already, she is acting like a moron. Not something that Hermione is. So she is so far out of character it’s blowing holes in the stories environment. It’s ruining immersion completely. Every single time Hermione is mentioned now, it’s not her. It’s a character that has her name but none of her personality as it’s been established. It also feels like it’s being set up for something big with this stupid ritual. I’m not interested. It’s distracting from the main plot and is utterly unimportant. So you have a stupid plot point, ruining your story and it’s also taking away from the main plot. Dumb decision. I’m getting frustrated, the story is quickly becoming too horrible to enjoy or bother reading further.

The fight was epic! I glad Dumbledore finally acted like a headmaster and took care of the students therefore let Harry take care Voldy!

Nice story with a "normal beginning during the TWT" but with a twist: an encounter made some years before whose changed destiny
Thank you for your work :)

Noooo! You should have killed Ron or Molly :’(
I’m so glad Harry took Greyback out! Go Harry