Lovely story. The dramatic buildup was excellent and I for one thought the 22 chapters of waiting were quite worth it. Thanks for writing

Best Fanfic I've ever read had me hooked from the first chapter. Keep up the good work. :)

I have loved your story up to this point. I was really disappointed with this chapter. Harry is all great, has a badass attitude when angered and is powerful. Hes also good enough to be offered the DADA position from dumbles but he was so fucking lame in this chapter. Everyone is doing something and he lifts Ella out of the way? Shoots a couple expelliarmus and that's about it. Shame.

Breaking the fourth wall huh? Yeah doesnt take me out of the story at all. I really liked the storythe last 2/3 chapters) but damn you really didnt care about this story anymore. Id have to correct Hermione, as a reader im writing „little reviewsnice to know how much you care about reader who have something to say) complaing about a good story turned bad

well this just feels weird, i think this is the worst battle scene that ive read so far. First off all it feels very weird to even see a battle in this so far lighthearted „teenage drama story”. But i guess it fits a bit because the fight itself was pretty weird. I mean PLEASE everyone just stops fighting and is taking a break to watch Neville and Bella fight ? ouukaayy suuuuurehey Harry cool fight huh?pfft id had her on the ground five minutes ago Mr. Random Death Eater”
... or how am i supposed to imagine that?).
Thats a bloody battle not a time to show off, Ron would run to his Help straight after Harry and not stop him. I dont even want to go into the rest of the battle.

I hate how long its taking for something to happen. Im sick of reading about Ron kissing Hermione

I like how u put the Wronski Feint
that it was named after a Polish seeker
not many people know that

hai
im from 2019 if u wanna know

That was absolutely AMAZING! Your writing skills are On. Point. The plot was fantastic and you NAILED Fred and George's personalities. Nothing was really OOC either and the pairings are just PERFECT! If you're still writing, maybe you could do an epilogue; like Hermione and Harry's married life and maybe even the proposal? Oh and Ron and Luna's too. I just need to say this again: This story was bloody spectacular. Great job!

This was going to good, I even ignored your use of ‘trolley’ (we Brit’s call them teams and they aren’t that common here) but when you start using dollars and cents? Oh no honey, pounds and pence... Harry Potter is British, stop butchering it with American terminology

OMG plz I beg you do more it was so juicy I loved it

Hello ! Really amazing fic ! Thanks !

I don't think there's a sequel and I'm not going to make sure because this was the perfect ending. Thank you for a great read!

I love this sooooo much...its so adorable and im really happy i found this story...

TAKE THAT ABIGAIL!

Well written, nicely paced and sweet. Lovely fluff, and very little darkness.