I rolled my eyes within the first few lines. Let me guess, Dumbledore and molly have been stealing money from him, Harry will find a weird reason not to be friends with Hermione and Harry is actually way more powerful than Dumbledore or Voldemort because of some blocks evil Dumbledore put into his ‘magical core’. Bollocks.

Totally enjoyed this story - binge read from beginning to end. My apologies for not saying thank you each chapter.

Loved it! Great job!

Thank you for sharing!

I enjoyed your story very much. The last few chapters seemed to be rushed a little, compared to the previous chapters. All in all it was a well written story. Thanks so much for sharing! Eventually I will re-read. Thanks again.

I liked this take better than JK's!

Thanks for the story. Nice work.

Well done! I enjoyed the story!

I enjoyed this story, but the end seemed quite rushed, although it's wrapped everything up well. Thanks for the story.

Great story

good thing in my story the potters will hunt down grindlewald before dumbledore uses him as plan b

niceee

good thing in my story the potters including a deage chat6les and dorea potter, long bottoms, artur and molly along with her brothrs will not join the order they will join a different order

very good

God I’m really tired of stories where you go out of your way to put down pure blood families with claims that they are nothing but bigots who’s points and concerns mean nothing. Along with constantly parading the belief that muggleborn wizards are considerably more powerful when. It’s plainly obvious that they aren’t. For instance people like to say hermione was the most powerful witch of her generation which is a white lie. She’s got the knowledge but not the power to back it. She’s a back seat fighter and always has a number advantage.

A fast paced AU.

An interesting story, just a couple of typos :)