Wow, I love this. You had me hooked from the get. Thank you so much for sharing this and I'm excited to read more of you. I wonder if I missed it: did you explain what the pure blood tradition with the pearl was about in a little more detail? I understand the gist, but was looking forward to Harry's perspective when the girls tore all the detail out of him before Daphne returned to the school.

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this story is amazing and I hope you can come back to it someday soon.

Except there is no new chapter for a very long time!

You know, I seldom see teenagers blushing. But the way how you describe it, it's kind of cute. Keep going.

This is written mostly in italics which makes it hard to read. It’s a supercool, raging Harry story.

Oh god;! Please keep this story going.. come back!

Hmm, I wonder why I hadn't read this story before? It's really good. Can't find any flaws in it, which is a bit surprising. Hope you complete it.

I enjoyed reading the beginning but it seems like Daphne doesnt really have much of a depth to her relationship with Harry. While I'm aware that daphne cant know everything that goes on in Harry's life, him keeping simple things secret (training/helping Charlie) seems lame. why keep that a secret from your girlfriend but not hermione and Katie? hermione doesnt even like quidditch compare to Katie. Ocs are confusing and unnecessary. rather have a story with great development and more concentrated on harry and daphne relationship. rather than daphne being left in the dark since majority of this story is her point of view. while I appreciate other characters growing I feel like you added too many too fast. then again it is very different from where harry is too dependent on daphne but i dont like the fact that she literally doesnt know what's going on around her while everyone else does.

Thank you for a great story

Awesome chapter! Can’t wait to read more!

I don't normally post reviews on anything but I have to say that this is one of the best (If not the best) works that I have read in a long long time. I'm not usually the one for fluff but I absolutely adore this. I really like the whole idea of using flashbacks while the two of them are in bed remembering things. It is a bit similar to, "Across the time" by Izwan but still different as all this is going on during a single night. This story is extremely tender, endearing and in my view at least, it has been extraordinary immersive so far. I hope you update this sometime. It would be very disappointing if this fic were to get abandoned. Ignore all the haters. I think I've read your first chapter over 4 times by now and I still am amazed at how well you have managed to capture and portray emotions.

You updated for 5 months then stopped. Is this story now abandoned?

ummm...OK, it's been a while...
do we get the rest of this story
I like what you've done here though, a great start

I thought the Ron scene was cheap, silly and unnecessary. It ruined the story for me and added senseless drama. Ron is a older brother whose sister was attacked and possessed, if there's anyone he'd feel protective and sorry for it would be a girl who was attacked and hospitalized. At the end of the day Ron is considered a hero, because he faces his fears and overcomes them.

I understand you want to make him a villain for no purpose other than you don't like him, but don't insult our intelligence and please remove this scar on an otherwise good story.