I hope that Harry gets his belongings back! I also hope that Fudge and Umbridge get arrested for their crimes!

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I was willing to give this story a chance, except you immediately ruined it by having Harry casually agree to letting some random vampire he just met have free reign over his blood. She straight up attacked him, but he treated it like it was some weird and quirky thing some cute girl did. That's just plain unrealistic and unacceptable. It's super rude and Harry isn't the type of character who would accept that. He's not some sad little beta Japanese male who is terrified of women. And he's had experience with people attacking him before, and he typically reacts with violence and/or anger.

Not "Oh, it's okay! Just ask me next time!" No one would react that way to a vampire, hot or not, biting them and drinking their blood. That anyone would think that's a normal interaction must be missing the vast majority of their brain cells. Or they're too busy thinking with their dicks because "moka is big titty anime waifu uwu" and ignore the reality of the situation.

If anything, the situation with the "real" Moka who was a huge, arrogant cunt would have clued him in that there's no way he should be so comfortable around her and let her literally use him as food. Yet, because weeb bullshit and you the writer being an idiot, he immediately forgives her and acts like there was nothing wrong. He blames it all on the "other" Moka, as if they aren't the same entity.

This sort of small-brain baby writing just gives me a headache. It's too stupid to be acceptable. I can't read this trash. No amount of big anime titty can save this when Harry is just an unrealistically accepting wimp who seems all too willing to be used as a food source. Even if he were amenable to the idea in one form or another, the way Moka goes about it would make it so that no one with self-respect would actually allow it unless she paid him one way or another. She acts like a greedy, spoiled child. Over his essential bodily fluids that he needs to live. It's not that she NEEDS it. She WANTS it. Because she likes the taste and the smell. She has other food options. There's just no way a real person would accept that kind of selfish reason to give out their literal lifeblood to be someone's snack. And we know Harry's personality. He wouldn't accept it either. The only way he would is if she desperately needed it to survive or if maybe she were his girlfriend. And it is way too early in the story for THAT kind of excuse.

"You just hurt me in a couple of ways and your bitchy alter ego also tried to hurt me even worse and was generally a huge cunt. Yeah, sure go ahead and suck on my neck. I totally don't actually NEED my blood or anything."

No.

It's always weird to see goblin fan wanking. I mean, really? Dirty goblins inventing pensieves and the mind arts? I don't believe that for a second. Hell, I'd be more willing to believe a Veela invented them or a wizard ruined some veela and other creatures to make them in some experiments.

Goblins are miners. Maybe smiths, but I think that's just JKR being an idiot and mistaking them for dwarves (and making the real dwarves sing Valentine's as a stupid joke. She is a very dumb woman who regularly says really offensive shit on twitter). They do banking.

None of that implies a talent in mind magic, let alone "inventing" mind magic or pensieves. Just a overall a stupid idea.

Final two could have been a bit better but still a great story.

I’ve been reading this for less than one day but damn will I be sad when I finish it.

I laughed out loud when reading this bit... it’s perfect.

Voldemort strolled into the Great Hall during the divination exam.

No one saw it coming.

maybe it not need war if harry showed what he could do say rise a volcano and point out he was one off many if they want war the yoki was there first and just waiting foor humans to get somwhere, then have him lift atlantis and point out it pissed of yokis so the sank it, then show how to make rooms bigger lighter nd stuff and work on space, imagine harry as captain kirk screw first fight later

good going on using the manga, the anime is not exactly organized

Eh. I think I'm done here. I don't like your take on Harry and you're just rehashing the R&V plot.

Shark Punching Center

Enjoyed the story thanks

He never said yes.

Keep it dead jackass.

Another great story. Thanks for the share. Never heard of Rosario vampire but enjoyed the new story line for a kick ass Harry.