Good story. I guess the romantic in me, or the realist (depending) hoped that Harry could find someone with whom to love, marry, and have children. I guess with a wizard's longevity, he still could. Loneliness would drive him bonkers, methinks. With a hundred plus years of life without purpose? Definitely. Plus, I think Hermione would come around to be at least a pen pal. After all, Harry didn't do anything to harm people on purpose. The ancient priest did that. She should understand, more than anyone, about fulfilling a prophecy.

"The Lightning Child"... Well! A fitting end, although Hermione and aRon and their "individual children"... very intriguing. And Hermione going topless?! WTF!? Did she get hit on the head or something? This is worth a story all by itself, their "married life".
I'm looking forward to it!

Loved this short story, would've loved to see a sequel or something but I really enjoyed this story even tho it turned a little dark at the end but it wasn't dark lord dark imo

this was amazing! and I would truly love to see this continued into a second arc :D

Ahh this is something I would love to see more of, the prophecy part has me so intrigued

Wow!

Wow. That took a dark turn at the end. After all the trouble Harry had had with horcruxes over the years in this story, I wouldn't have expected him to make one himself.

Awesome and intriguing story
Love it

crazy, i loved it :)

Great ending. I absolutely just love all of your stories they're just so great

This was breath taking. I was clutching at my pearls every second of the expedition. Teddy is adorbs.

The fricking prophecy at the end and Harry making the entire fucking pyramid as the hocrux. Omfg.

Chills.

But awesome. Brilliant. Fic.

That's amazing! I can tell you the last time I read a story where someone made an adult Harry actually seem like an adult. Plus the concept was just so freaken cool I have to look for more Egypt stories!

So cool!

Wow! I was NOT expecting that! Great story! I loved it!

wow,awesome story! :)