holy mother of fuck, shit brah this was incredible, i love this story. This AU is really good.

Brilliant work, had my full attention from start to end!

Wow this is amazing so far! Are you sure it’s not an Ender’s Game crossover ?

I'll admit, I started this out of pure boredom. But after reading it, I love it!

I really wish that this story continued.

brilliant...

cool cool story :)

cool cool story

Now things are getting REALLY spicy!

Amazing story! I love your plot and characterisation, this was hands down one of the most elaborate and engaging harry fanfic I've ever read. Thank for this lovely gift and for it's company during Quarantine. I'm hanging on the edge of my seat for what comes next but I have to say it's already great as it is. thank you again!

fucking pussy

Just finished reading all 52 chapters. This fic is great: quality writing, characters act sensibly, Harry is both likable and interesting, etc.. This is one of my favorite fics and I wish there was more.

It seems, however, that development stalls for long periods of time. For example, Harry and Tracey's relationship, despite getting substantial focus, remains nearly exactly the same throughout the whole fic. The way Harry fought (and the Battle Class as a whole fought), the spells and tactics he used, were developed beautifully towards the beginning of the fic and then didn't change at all. There is a long period of time where pressure builds on Harry and it climaxes as everything falls apart and he decides to leave but then not leave. I don't know how I feel about this, I like that Harry made the mistakes to put him in that position, but it feels like it so much had been building up to this and while its obvious he isn't going to leave for the sake of the story, it felt kind of cheap just to go back to doing the same things, albeit with a greater focus on the why.

Overall I love this fic and this review focuses on the negatives more than the positives in part because there are too many positives and in part because I know if it was my story I'd appreciate the negatives being detailed.

4.5/5

Alas, it's nearly 2 years since the last update, but I'm still coming by to check because this story is just that good! :) Thanks again for all the work and take your time, we'll still be here when you're ready!

Man the whole enders game hp mix is starting to tip heavily towards the former :D. I love it!

oh NO