Sometimes you're on page 73 of a search and find something truly original. This was such a story. Glad I read it!

I don't understand what Aguamenti has to do with the ground. From what I understand, you wave your wand in the air while saying the spell and water comes out of the end of your wand. It continues until you end the spell. How is the ground involved, except that the water falls to the ground because of gravity?

great story and very entertaining... I will have to read it again later, as there were bits that confused me... but I did enjoy it lots...

Epic fic. You're a fantastic writer.

This story is utterly fantastic and amazingly original. I love your version of Percy and Dudley. I love Cal and Snape. I love how you're painting the world in grey. Fantastic.

Great story! I loved it! Thanks for sharing. :)

This was quite an enjoyable story. You managed to write a Harry-breaks-away-from-Dumbledore story without actually bashing Dumbledore. That's quite an accomplishment, especially considering canon Dumbledore is so totally bashable.

"...someone, presumably Dumbledore, had told Snape who he really was."
Trust Dumbledore to ruin any chance of them forging a new relationship.

And what about the Hallows? They were a thread running through much of the story, and Harry just got his hands on all three, but then... *fizzle.* After going to all that trouble to have Harry unite the Hallows, you did absolutely nothing with it.

I greatly enjoyed the detail in your story. Excellent piece!

thanks you for history.

Hey, this fic got really interesting really fast. I had to reset my ffnet account to comment. I'm in love with your worldbuilding, feels like a completely new thing hidden behind a familiar world. This fic is going to keep me company while commuting this week, thank you for writing and sharing

This story was so amazing! ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! I’ve been binge reading for the past few hours and I absolutely loved it! Thank you so much for writing this and posting it!

FANTASTICALLY AWESOME! I loved every second of it and was totally routeing for Gellert by about chapter 7. I'm in love with how he was Ariel the whole time and how he faced Voldy to protect his family. That he added Harry/Light to his family was wonderful and kinda touching. :)
This is definitely being added to my favorites list and I look forward to reading it again sometime.
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... I am literally feeling speechless right now ...
This story was amazing, everything about it. I had my doubts in the first chapter but that rather quickly changed when I continued. Wow! What A Story! And especially your plot, ‘cause (at least to me) it was very unique but still familiar, I don’t know exactly how to express it, but something in that manner. I love this story and I am sure to read it again in the future, and the way the characters are portrayed! At first I thought there would be extreme bashing or something like that, but no. To me everyone stayed pretty much in character and I loved it! While reading I had the feeling like I couldn’t put it away. Seems like I wasn’t as speechless as I thought I was in the beginning..
TO EVERYONE reading some reviews before actually reading a story: this one is highly recommended.

Thank you for sharing this piece of artwork! 3

I started reading this story yesterday, and it's fantastic so far! I only have one critique. I know this story is marked as complete, but halfway through chapter 9, you wrote that the werewolf camp was celebrating the demise of Dolores Umbridge. Demise. There's just one problem with this; she's not dead. Instead, I submit that you should have used ousting or possibly imprisonment or similar, but not a word signifying loss of life.

This was great!