Interesting story but spoilt buy typo's, wrong or missing words and spelling errors. You need someone to at least read/check your stories before posting them.

"Rabastan" not "Rabastion". Also there is no "r" in Alecto.

extremely well written , kept me on the edge of my chair reading- amazing endings

so what fo the numbers mean

I am not a gun expert, but even I know that the correct term for this type of rifle is "doublebarreled" shotgun not side by side.

Compartment door actually. The only train cars that would be like that here would be the sleeper cars on Amtrak. However, on the Hogwarts Express it's the passenger cars that are separated into compartments.

Well, leastwise this Headmaster/Wizangammot Chief/ Supreme Mugwump died where he spent most of his time.

Did your fingers forget? Victor 's brother is Peter Krumtherefore, the Krum brothers parents are Krum also.

Somewhere in the back of his head, Harry's logic was telling him "the nonmagical world has scuba diving and deep sea diving gear available,why do o you need to learn this "bubbly head charm?"

Ok.
So Dark Lord Dumbledore kidnapped four children,
and posted guards to keep them prisoner.
He gave the guards instructions to kill intruders.
He made sure that if one of the victims were to be rescued, then as failsafe they would drown rather than escape.

Cal we petition for a Date with a Dementor for the silly old fool?

why is the dragon changed that Fleur had to get passed, for the one Cedric drew? Even in the movie Fleur held a blue dragon in her hand when she drew it out of the sack. Cedric drew the Welsh Green.

What would have happened if just the act of Harry's name being called, was enough to make his parentsprotection magic come to the fore and spirit Harry away to either Ilvermorny, or Nifleheimtwo schools the Potters had considered for their son seriously enough that they included the options in their will if Harry was ever going to be in danger)?

Too many authoritarian wizard parents who taught their kids to "do as they're told" And "Without question."

The Weasley Twins and all their inventions that bang and boom should have been turned loose on the more bigoted Deatheaters, don't you think? Hmm?

And this is the guy who bit his own finger off ?! He's sqeamishing over getting the tip of his tail caught in the door of "visitor entrance to the ministry?!