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rhidragon chapter 13 . 7/18 Thank you for writing this story. Couldn't put it down. Actually I had to at one point as it was half 2 in the morning Blessed be x |
pavook chapter 8 . 5/28 Shame on Luna. She is channeling her inner Dumbledore with this Padma development. She is completely disregarding Harry is this decision and we don't even know the view of Hermione. Why is Padma pushing this much, it's like an obsession, it doesn't feel like a naturally formed bond. |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/8 Wonderfully happy story with a moral that life is what you make it and to enjoy it. |
Tracey Young chapter 13 . 4/12 Thanks for a great read. |
Kai chapter 7 . 11/25/2019 Riddle's orphanage wasn't only abusive. It was in London. In the early forties. When whole streets of houses were regularly blown into pieces by German weaponry, the people were used to sleep in the Underground tunnels, and people from Southeast England and beyond sent THEIR children to Scotland for safety. That's when Dumbledore sent Riddle from Scotland into the maelstrom of destruction the German Luftwaffe wreaked. "Don't bother me, piss off to London and if you croak it, who cares. One less mudblood bitch to feed." At least that's the message that Riddle received. Really no wonder he went ... DARK. |
Kai chapter 2 . 11/25/2019 It sounds impressive and looks like Luna is a genius. Well, she is, probably. But when she trounced Ronald when she was seven years old one shouldn't forget that Ronald was only eight at that time. If you imagine adolescent Ronald playing everyone in Gryffindor against the wall and then little Luna beating him soundly it's more impressive but unfortunately not true. |
rhidragon chapter 13 . 11/5/2019 Really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for taking the time to write and post. Blessed be x |
Naienkon chapter 13 . 10/14/2019 I greatly enjoyed this story and I loved Luna's perspective. Very well done. |
Concolor44 chapter 12 . 10/5/2019 Hmh. Was just reading through the Reviews. "Guest" was giving you ALL KINDS of crap in what looks like an apparent bid to cut you off at the knees. Don't listen to him. He's a dipweed dealing with (more than) a few insecurities of his own. Your story rocks. |
Concolor44 chapter 13 . 10/5/2019 Marvelous! Beautiful! Many kudos! I have nothing constructive to add. Your story was well-plotted and internally consistent; the characters were handled deftly; your dialogue (in places) just sparkled. Adding to Favorites. |
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 10/4/2019 Okay ... THIS is different. I like different. So many of these fics just sort of run together and become indistinguishable. But you have done an excellent job of capturing Luna's character here. On to the next chapter! |
Khatix chapter 3 . 9/25/2019 If they were smart they would destroy the cabinet/portal and take all his notes/books there. I'm glad this is a true representation of Draco, it was easy to see JKR switched her end goals between book 5 and 6/7. I'm sorry but I refuse to believe that all that time Draco never killed, tortured, or raped anyone in canon, he should of been sent to Azkaban for life instead of getting off. Then again this is the fic where the hero named one of his sons after 2 of the 4 men who ruined his childhood and 2 of 3 men who dealt and/or condoned the child abuse he suffered. |
Raiderhater13 chapter 13 . 9/20/2019 Thanks great story |
BillBrink chapter 13 . 9/12/2019 Read it a while ago and didn't review. Don't know why. So just want to tell you thanks for sharing this fine story with us. I truly enjoyed it. |
RatherFabulous chapter 13 . 8/29/2019 Enjoyable story. I loved Luna as the deus ex machina. Had to skim FAR too much iffy high-school wish-fulfillment porn, but the actual story was a fun ride. |