and no one important got hurt

Ah hahahahhaha you tottally should have made thw sock sniffing cannon :D

Ok. I've read this first chapter and all I can think is that Hagrid is going to fall in love. This is off to an interesting start.

Kind of slow start, but amazing as a concept.

Well, that's probably not good.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Nice job on this chapter!

pretty good story

i really hope you wont turn Hermione and Rons fued into a twisted romance, they have absolutely nothing ot base a relationship on, just like in canon.

You... are amazing. You are one of the few people that stick true to their story and doesnt rip it to shreds because they have this insane unealistic vision of their story in mind. You let Rex fuck Voldie up and didnt have a ridicolous plot device stop him from doing so. For this i salute you, you are a fucking hero type-00! Please never stop writing.

Good that Snape wasnt spared for no reason, he is a piece of shit and should be treated accordingly

So far the story is kind of neat, the plentiful grammar mistakes are a tad annoying but while they are many they are not big ones that make reading hard.

Also, glad you didn't force something with Annabel, usually she'd be going to Hogwarts but you showed restraint and respected the HP universe, most fic writers can't. I appreciate that. And it allows for some plot happenings during the summer.

This is really different. Interested to see where this goes. When Harry grows up does his monster leave him?

awesome

I'm starting not like Annabel she's talking for Harry like hes stupid seriously it's just a matter of time before he begins calling her mistresses anyway seriously im out i can't stand this oc i liked the fic before she came in and became Harry's "leader"..