This is good, but a bit convoluted. Quite frankly it doesn’t make sense and even though I know it all should at some point, that doesn’t help with my current frustration.

Well I hate purposefully vague and confusing. It’s the exact opposite of what I think writing should be. Being purposefully vague and confusing just annoys the shit out of me and makes me think you have zero talent as a writer. Your writing is supposed to entertain. Since it doesn’t, it’s useless. Pointless waste of time to read something that will only cause negative reactions. Another pathetic wanna be author.

Well I don't review until I read the whole story but I'm really loving this story. thank you

So everyone is using Harry, even Fate and Death.

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

Hey! I'm loving your story, and I would like to translate this fic to my language (portuguese), if you give me permission, of course.

to be honest I think everyones a right arse

I'm getting whiplash, but I'm still enjoying muddling through.

The story is rather boring. Just an OC added to the typical Slytherin!Harry.

set up a game. force the player to participate. set a condition. make sure the player breaks the condition to lose. fucking hell just kill the player. you just want to torture the player.

gods playing their toy mortals.

"Die you stupid insect!" - Essentially Every Existence Ex Eternity
"Live you stupid insect!" - Harry Potter

I cheated for the first one - Ex is latin for "of."

I wouldn't stop reading. TBH the thought had occurred to me - both that the pairing might fit and that you might be writing it.

I like Thana myself.

I just had this image of you pointing a gun at your story:

"Give me the gold or Story gets it!"