I really hope you don't have any kids I'm afraid you probably molest them you f****** pedophile

BDSM for teenagers that's pretty f***** up did you wa
nk when you wrote it

Declare a revolution on the gummint, sue each and every individual involved as well as their parent agency (keeps them tied up for YEARS!), sling Emby back over a barrel (you'll feel better...so will she), and start terminating.
Last but not least, I do hope you enjoyed your basket. How were the belladonna canapes?

I know, I know. It's hard to find good help.
Hopefully though she looks good stretched naked over a deck gun, with her bum in the air.
And it's definitely points if she pleads well.

You know, I cam actually pronounce Emby's name as written here.

That's just wrong, all on it's own.

It's "Nanner-nanner-nanner". Just as OJ.

Imagine the sheer NERVE of that woman, epi-mumblejumble-thelioma! Telling the great and OH SO MASTERFUL DARK LORD Der La Crlook "no". And to a simple Dark Mark!
Why, it's all the rage these days! No, reallly! Just ask JK!

Fer LaCroix has a few issues methinks. And so do his ladies. Have fun wit da bats, guys!

I will now address the following idioticcomment:

"I have noticed that some people have commented on Harry being stupid (as usual - seriously, is there any fight he hadn't been miraculously lucky?) in the last fight, and that others needed to win for him. That was my intention - until then, fate tied him and Voldie together, but once he died, Harry lost his Gary Stu powers..."

Bitch... you killed of bellatrix by making her utterly fucking retarded enough to put a weapon in the hands of someone she intended to kill and then helped her fucking AIM IT AT HER HEART. If we wanted to see Harry get by on luke and plot armor we would have stuck to that idiotic canonical series. You just pissed on everything you were building till now.

I read it over again. Tell me, what the fuck was the point of giving him wandless magic if you dont let him fucking use it when he needs it most?

Or his training not keeping him from getting distracted or making idiotic mistakes?

Or his vaunted power and stamina somehow being useless because bella is just so fucking good?

This fucking simpleton just fucking lets that woman torture him and he does absolutely nothing but curl into a ball and take it. He is physically fucking stronger than her, he has had some measure of close combat training, and she STILL kicks his fucking ass.

And where is his supposed security doing in all this?
Chilling in the Caribbean? And after all this talk of them being there to support him in the endgame?

All this fucking nonsense, and all of it to seamingly to force a plot development that is baffling? I mean... Voldy dying because he stabbed himself... because he didnt double check his backups? What the hell kind of shit is this?

And it got WORSE. For all that training, they STILL make idiotic rookie moves.

Are you fucking kidding me with this shit?
All that training, all that preparation, and he STILL gets blindsided even after the Nott ambush?

I've always wanted a Harmony fic where the twins are a big part of the plot but have never found one that satisfied my needs. This one was exactly it. Thank you!

A very interesting start to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Wait there going back? Thats pretty dumb