This conjure stuff is just... Meh. Makes things too simple. And how dafuq u can conjure food?

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what a great story thank you
I nearly wet myself laughing at luna and her arguments with her brain shear genius
thanks again

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Going to read the rewrite now. I like the story, even with the few non canon sections on birthdays, etc. A very good read, even not completed!

I'm interested in what's going to happen next but gotta say the whole food conjuring spell/act shouldn't be happening. I'm sure you know how that went in the Deathly Hallows and so I respect the decision you made to ignore that rule lol but yeah I hope this doesn't become much of a pattern.

An excellent idea for Luna!

They talked about the spell, but I don't remember you saying they actually did it!

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This story is in serious need of reposting with closed font changes. As far as I can tell, you never closed any change to bold or italic font, meaning every word in the chapter following it was also changed.

write a sequal please!

It is a good story quite like it cause it also a different interaction between Harry and Hermione and there relationship. I mean hardly seen any fanfic where there minds linked like this. But it's bit of a downer when there doing it and voldie is focusing inbetween i mean love harms him, but damn that's no fun during sex, it even causing abrupt good scene writing. And i am a bit pissed you skipped the wedding so fast and leave the honeymoon out of it? they focus on a lot of things instead of the wedding and meanwhile it's speeding through the last pages. What kind of epilogue is this? planning on a sequel that never came?
Bit disappointing in the end this story while it was so good.

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