Hey, just discovered your fic and am currently reading it obsessively. I’ve gone through a lot of what your Harry has. I always wished and hoped that the people who hurt me would have been brought to justice. This chapter was heavy. Rough to read. I’m not ashamed to say I shed more than a few tears while reading it. It was beautiful and set my soul a little more free with each paragraph. Love it.

Update?

Without that harem nonsense, this could have been a really good story. I stoped at chapter 15 when Harry making out with the second girl started (what a surprise) an argument. And wow, what a horrible chapter you wrote. He blames the girl for getting angry about him cheating? Jesus, grow up.

Just reread this amazing story over the past few days, and I sincerely hope it isn't dead. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!

I've been really enjoying Whispers in the Night since I've started reading. I've particularly looked forward to year 4 and seeing what you'd do with it. Having made it here though it keeps getting more difficult to keep reading.

I knew this was going to be a harem fic. I think you said Harry, Daphne, Susan and Fleur in one of your earliest chapters. I usually find that not every girl gets the spotlight. It doens't really matter when it's a fic mostly focused on lemons over plot. I feel like you are prioritising relationships over plot which makes it very frustrating to see Harry, Susan and Dapnhe in particular be so weird about theirs.
I loved how they came to be a threesome together. I just don't understand why they are planning to 'audition' more girls to join them. There's no actual reason except so you can make Harry be with every girl you like it seems like. It feels so unnatural for them to pursue all these other girls (especially the one already in a relationship) when they've got each other. It seems like they're trying to add more girls becuase they can (or maybe because they feel like they have to with the soulmates) instead of doing it because they want to.

Especially Harry kissing everyone because of 'mistletoe' felt like a cheap excuse. Most people wouldn't appreciate their partner doing that regardless of mistletoe. There's also Harry pursuing his friends girlfriend even though he always claims his friends are most important to him. The n the fact that he gets with Tonks without a word to Susan or Daphne. It just feels unnecessarily complicated. I hope you make Harry listen to Bill and stick with just Susan and Daphne. I'd rather see Tonks join than Fleur (since that seems to be mostly lust just now).

I love your story and your Harry. I just wish you wouldn't make him seem like some egocentric horndog who wants every girl he sees. To quote Susan: Why can't Susan and Daphne be enough?

I hope you are able to continue this awesome story sometime! I’ll be waiting :) ..even if you just release the one shots of the later years. Thanks for writing!

Thanks for writing with such impeccable grammar and varied sentence structure. Some fanfic writing is enjoyable enough to read, but your writing is advanced and has emotional depth. It is more interesting to read more advanced writing. You make me think, and feel, so much more than other amateur writers. (and more than plenty “professional” writers too!) Thank you for sharing!

Always good to see writers going back over their work and fixing mistakes that they find. Constant self improvement is vital in both writing and in life. Look forward to what’s to come next.

I play DND. I loved how Harry loved all his ladies. Why as we humans should only be limited to one partner is beyond me, if everyone is willing why shouldn't you have more than one

Damn. Just after 8 chapters. And its supposedly the 3rd year of Hogwarts. There is already enough information via emotional signs or formal or informal that shows Harry to having a Horrible childhood to a adventurous/dramatic life in Hogwarts.

Thanks for the Chapter

Well I would say a wide conversation about the main characters life with another individual is a marvelous way to introduce a story. In this chapter you have suggested that Harry will have a new Path (Healer, Curse Breaker). The Canon suggested Auror and teaching was a given due to 5th year.

So far this chapter has made Harry to seem as sort of a calm thinker and willing to get help if needed.

So far I like this story and will continue reading. 1st chapters are the bait. And now I have been hooked. Lets see I far can I be reeled?

Please please please come back to this?!

So I've cried two chapters in a row... let me regain my composure and I'll offer a real opinion on the story

I love your take on the HP-verse, for me you definitely succeeded in making everything more coherent and realistic. Your changes to "known" events from canon are great, I had a lot of fun uncovering those bit by bit as the story progressed!
The way you incorporated apprenticeships is very cool as well, the plot-points connected to that are very rewarding so far.
I hope you'll update this story eventually, I'm really interested in seeing where this all leads! :D

i dont know why, but the part of hagrid being allowed to get another wand made me cry