| Reviews for The Sniper |
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ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 1 . 7/5 Really cool one shot you got here I’d love to see a full story made out of the idea |
cliffdweller chapter 1 . 6/28 Good Story, Thanks |
JheremyC chapter 1 . 6/25 Well written and good use of the characters. I liked the authors use of Harry’s seeker skills as explanation as to his sniper abilities. Diggory was a nice touch as well. |
HellHound-1997 chapter 1 . 6/20 This is great! I love it, well done. |
TomHRichardson chapter 1 . 4/18 This is one of those stories that I wish I'd thought-of first. It's brilliant! Be proud. |
Mochimaddness chapter 1 . 4/3 this was great |
InterdimensionalHitchhiker84 chapter 1 . 2/29 This was GREAT thank you so much for writing and sharing it, dear author! |
Lordlexx chapter 1 . 2/22 I think you misunderstood what makes a squib a squib. It's often portrayed as 'a non-magical child born to a magical parent' but while that is correct, it's also not enough information. A squib is a person born to a magical person or couple that doesn't have enough magic to use a wand or most magics in general. However they can still see and interact with the magical world; use the floo, see/walk past/through muggle repelling wards, see dementors and likely thestrals, use portkeys. It's just enough magic to see and interact with the magical world but not be a part of it. Aside from that, I'm shocked you thought Hermione and Ron would last as friends (or more) without Harry there. |
kiltannen chapter 1 . 2/20 Brilliant Just Brilliant! |
Ralph Zecco chapter 1 . 12/7/2019 Excellent. The right amount of dialog and action. It was interesting and kept my interest throughout the story. I've read too many 100,000 words that it seemed they included a lot of dialog and descriptions just to increase their word counts and the stories I deleted from my saved stories so I won't try to wade through them again. Thank you and I hope you continue to write. |
Corwyn chapter 1 . 12/1/2019 Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this story with us. 1 for Harry taking the alias "Cedric Diggory" |
Charlee56 chapter 1 . 11/30/2019 Grr-rrrRREAT STORY! And speaking as a former Spec 4th Class Paratrooper with the 508th Airborne Infantry, 82nd Airborne Division United States Army, for someone who never served in the British army you had a lot of this right! Job well done, Troop. |
Damon Phillips chapter 1 . 11/23/2019 TIS BUT A FLESH WOUND! -monty python (don't know which character said it) |
Majerus chapter 1 . 11/11/2019 Really enjoyable, thanks :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2019 Of the stupidity of Hermione stuck with MoRon is remove the shot was good. |