Reviews for Lunch at Maxine's
Guest chapter 4 . 5/29
Good. Brilliant. Outstanding.
LimitedEternity chapter 3 . 4/23
Oh they did! I would have been so embarrassed, I thought her mom was pushing bard! Well, she certainly would have been s Slytherin if she were a witch! That was sly.
LimitedEternity chapter 2 . 4/23
The ending made me hold my breath, they... They didn't... Oh my gosh!
Anonymous chapter 4 . 2/26
Bloody brilliant! One of the best fanfics I've ever read
chemisgirl chapter 4 . 2/10
No sé si solo seré yo, pero la Molly de este fic no me agradó para nada, aunque, habiendo leído el cuarto libro de HP, sabemos que Molly pudo haber tenido esa misma reacción si esto es canon...
En fin, me gustó la idea de que la madre de Hermione haya hecho todo un plan para que Hermione pueda enterarse de sus verdaderos sentimientos hacia Harry, son tan perfectos juntos... cada día deseo que JK haya pensado dos veces antes de haber escrito que Hermione se quede con Ron y que Harry se quede con Ginny. Tal vez la única forma que el harmony sea canon, sea que JK mate a Ron, como lo tenía pensado, pero igual puedo seguir soñando, ¿no?
MarsPotter chapter 4 . 10/21/2019
Oh Iove this! This was such a fun exploration
Chloeebeee chapter 4 . 9/7/2019
Helen is the best! That last chapter was excellent
Guest chapter 4 . 5/10/2019
Quite like the story very good, also the last part with molly it's done in a good way.
Only 2 things bums me out, no wedding at the end of it, and really 2 weeks later without there h/hr conversation i really wanted to read that.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 4 . 2/27/2019
The author's note at the end is the cherry on top of a wonderful story. I grinned like a loon through almost every line of this. Thank you so much for writing such a wonderfully happy little ditty. Nice to see a fic where Molly is eased around to things without malice or manipulation. Just common sense and a lot of backup. Fantastic.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 3 . 2/27/2019
I knew she had the date saved in the Weasley's little book. Always helps to have the inside track when making a big bet. I'm not sure which I'm more a fan off; Harry being the one in the know and acting normally, or Hermione. Both have their pluses and minuses, but either way, I do thoroughly enjoy a good lightbulb moment between them. Though the physical convincers are always fun too, i.e. the bludger to the face approach. Great chapter in a fantastic story.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 2 . 2/27/2019
Another brilliant chapter. So... how much is Helen in the pot for and how soon after this lunch is her date? She seems to be quite keen on them telling each other as soon as possible. She has me suspicious. I'm curious where Harry has been hiding during all this. One table over under the cloak, or somewhere sneakier? But I only have a half hour for lunch and it must be almost up. Maybe I'll leave the last two chapters for after work just in case I have a bad afternoon, then I can have a fluffy pick me up to take home.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 1 . 2/27/2019
Oh my god, that was so damned good. I love when Mrs Granger pulls the wool off Hermione's eyes. She is always so subtle and sneaky and yet, bam. Truth bomb when Hermione least expects it.

And the story you've already laid down. The airport is brilliant, Harry just noping the heck out of there with Hermione. The only possible outcome from that was taken aback enough to be quiet or full Mount Weasley end of Pompeii level blow up. Kind of wished for the second option but the first worked out ok too.

And talk about well-named chapters. You certainly get to the heart of things with the first line. I already love this to bits. How had I not read it before now?
SofiaTereseGranger chapter 4 . 12/1/2018
Helen smiles a lot
wprosser2008 chapter 1 . 10/27/2018
I legit read this JUST because you named Hermione's mother something other than Emma. Figured that requires some creativity most fanfic writers lack. Was not disappointed. Now onto chapter 2!
noreenklose chapter 4 . 8/17/2018
Extremely nice for a non- Weasley- bashing story.
I enjoyed it.
Thanks for writing.
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