Awesome! Love how it all worked out.

This is the one where The Brightest Witch of Her Age/The Strongest and Bestest Witch Of Them All is constantly thinking about and all-but begging Harry to Have His Baby because That Is The Most Important Thing or something.

Cute story but couldn't hang with all the I WANT HIS BAYBEEEE nonsense coming from barely 16 year old Brightest Witch of Her Age bits.

All I'm going to say is that I've put off my work for a good hour or two to read this. Good Job!

Good story.
A delight the children of Harry and Hermione.
I am glad that Hermione's relatives have reconciled.
Kira

Harry put the stupid bishop in his place.
Hermione's relative bus is like a bomb.
Kira

Harry damaged in an accident, it's very ironic
House elves on strike.
Harry nervous because he's going to be a father is very cute.
How bad Hermione's grandparents were.
Kira

Hermione always thinking about improving the situation of others.
Harry is a genius for thinking of a school.
It seems to me that Harry was very wise on the subject of sons.
Albus is cunning.
Seamus tremendous.
Harry fulfills his wife's dreams.
Kira

I liked the rescue of Hermione.
I felt a little sorry for Dumby even though he looks like a child.
Hermione goes crazy when she forgets something.
I liked that Neville's parents were cured and Remus didn't suffer anymore.
Kira

What a nice gesture from Harry when he bought the horses.
The Dursleys shouldn't have messed with Harry because Hermione is terrifying and vindictive when she wants to.
Kira

Good story.
Bella should eat the words.
Kira

Some idiots really need to learn that keeping secrets from your other half, even for surprises can create more bad than good. What good is the surprise if you had to break trust to do it? Spending days ignoring his wife and kids was shitty and the surprise was not worth his actions. He could have at least told her he was working on a project or surprise but instead he left her miserable, alone and angry. You don’t do that to those you love. I despise secrets.

Why? I’m going to pretend the last two chapters didn’t happen. They were completely out of character. You changed characters intelligence and personality just so you could cause this drama. I don’t believe it was realistic for this to have happened. She has already had access to the book for months. Why the sudden uneccesary obsession? Harry had already made her spend only half the day with the book before and it worked fine. Why the sudden change?

I love your story it was wonderful and magnificent

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