The end

I've read this story to completion at least twice because I enjoyed so much. I think it was the second one I read where Harry became a girl. But it was very well written. It wasn't anywhere near as long the first time I read it. Now it's 37 chapters long and hopefully soon you'll find the time to finish it.

Lmao

Me gustó.

Encantador!
Perfecto!

Maravilloso!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto

Un Fantástico Comienzo!
Me Encanto!
Perfecto!

I would like to see this story finished. What's up with that.

The most surprising thing about this story is that you have somehow managed to make all the crazy stuff happening not the most unbelievable thing of the story. No, the by far most unrealistic thing of the story is the incredibly slow build of relationships... By this pace, I don't expect anything more than hand-holding to happen between them in the whole 450.000 words of the story. And they are fuckin 17 year olds! But you have them behave like they are 11 when it comes to intimacy. I don't get it. It's just so boring and unrealistic, I think I gotta drop the story.

I absolutely love this story and I hope that you finish it because you had made the girls relationship believable without not making the main character a cliche where they are asshole or make the characters one note since they all have different personalities from one another, which creates an interesting dynamic with each other as well.

I also loved the fact that you did not make Ron and Dumbledore a classic main villains in story like many others as well as show them their flaws along with many others and finally the plot that creates harem is so unique and is also not force because of their relationship started out as unintentional since they were swearing their loyalty to him instead of the typical tread where it is a love triangle filled with angst and drama or they all have feelings for him at the same time.

This is the reason why this is my favourite multiple paring story because of you had add development to the characters such as how they are coming to terms to their feelings to him and the bond of each other where the scene itself really does reflect on the meaning of family.

I am enjoying this story, I think it's very well done but, holy hell your insistence that Harry has to learn to use make-up and wear specifically and overtly feminine clothes if not all the time then the majority of the time is incredibly frustrating. I get what you're (probably) trying to do, but it comes off to me as saying that having a female body and/or being/identifying as a woman/girl means you have to wear skirts and dresses unless there is a specific reason not to (like for exercise).

Like I said, I really, truly am enjoying this story. This sort of, enforced femininity, I suppose, just tends to make it so I am constantly starting and stopping when it comes to this story. Which sucks, because it is a good story. I'm not asking for changes or whatever, just trying to convey how... disconcerting that is.

Oh, I thouhg this was complete, sad to see it till here, but it was still pretty amazing, thanks.

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This is a really great story

it has a good premes

it looks to be Gerry funny with Harry Potter being turned into a girl

I just hope those that deserve it get their come-up-ins

all in all a really great story

thanks for the fun read

sincerely Kyuubifire

this has been a great readso far, hope you come back and finish it.