| Reviews for HP: Chaos of the Phoenix |
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marvinkitfox1 chapter 12 . 4/5 Ok what happened to the "Dormant complications from his meeting with a Basilisk and a Phoenix come to the fore in time to save two very important people in his life." part of this story? FAr as I can see, he phoenix-flames to rescue the girls, and then...that's it. Not even a mention of it further on, not even in his ultimate gringotts detail expose. . . Not that I'm expecting this story to go any further. After all, when you've just made the main character a Demigod who is the heir of Merlin AND slytherin AND gryffindor AND married to the heir of Hufflepuff AND married to the heir of Ravenclaw... And he has access to a McGuffin that cures any and all magical curses and diseases... Where do you go next? Someone will need to import some Kryptonite to keep the story going. |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 12 . 2/29 More please |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 3 . 2/28 Please sir an we have some more |
Guest chapter 12 . 2/9 I truly think you are a gifted storyteller I also think you truly suck I have read like five of your stories now all of them have been great I don't think any one of them have gone past 10 or 15 chapters in your story almost every single one of them is been 10 or less and for that reason you truly suck these are great stories I don't know how you thought them up but they're great but you haven't written anything in five or 10 years now and I'm afraid I think you're dead and that's why you haven't written anything which is a damn shame you are a very gifted writer so I won't be leaving anymore remarks for you if you are gone I like to think that you're hearing my words about your stories as I say them and if not damn you suck and therefore as always thank you for writing |
Magemaster chapter 12 . 1/18 This fic is fascinating. I hope you find the inspiration to continue with it. |
csheila chapter 12 . 1/16 Nice. Thanks for sharing your work. Worth many completed stories. |
csheila chapter 10 . 1/16 Nicely done. Loved the IQ measurement as well. |
csheila chapter 9 . 1/16 Excellent suggestions |
csheila chapter 8 . 1/16 Intricate and believable. Love to see tension among the bad guys. |
csheila chapter 7 . 1/16 Nice surprises in this story |
csheila chapter 3 . 1/16 Painful but excellent chapters |
Guest chapter 12 . 11/28/2019 Finish. Please. |
PGHammer chapter 7 . 11/18/2019 He's back - and I'm not talking about Casper. (I get it - two sons are hurt, as is his only daughter; a third son is pushing up mandrakes, Hermione and Harry are both missing - and this is just the TIP of this iceberg the size of the Ross Shelf.) He doesn't know what the operational Unspeakables know yet - let alone what Remus, Sirius, Tonks, and Luna do. |
babiluv22 chapter 9 . 11/16/2019 Well here I am again really wish you wrote more lol |
Guest chapter 12 . 9/30/2019 I have read the story of yours once every two years or so I have looked forward to your new chapters but you haven't written a damn thing in almost 7 years so I say do you from the heart you are a mean bastard I love this story it is great I want to know what you were planning for the rest of your story but you haven't written anything in seven years so damn uteri hell please write more for God's sake finish the story |