Reviews for Harry Potter & the Never Ending Summer
lastgodofwar chapter 20 . 5/13
PLEASE WRITE MORE! It doesn't have to be long but please finish this with another story. it doesn't have to be the same length this was quite long (loved every second). But Just something to wrap up this epic story. That I believe gave Harry realistic and interesting powers. And depicted HONKS in a believable way. Plus i love HONKS. But I'm easy i love HARMONY and a lot of others just never GINNY. lol.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 20 . 4/11
This was a very enjoyable story that had 6th year all set up. I’ll add my vote that the sequel is definitely needed. It was obviously not intended as a stand-alone. I’ve selected to follow you in case you decide to do this. Who knows? Just recently there have been updates for fics that haven’t had any in years. This sequel could still happen.
Either way, thank you for your creativity and for sharing it with the rest of us.
NyxShader chapter 8 . 1/15
It's the knight bus not the night bus
adamantiumsleep chapter 20 . 10/7/2019
Very corny, full of tropes, easy to read and very good characters.

Very positive relationships and characters throughout. Entertaining read, leaving me wanting to read more.

Full of ideas and things happening, but very few actually play a significant role in the story.
So many things are set up with much fanfare, but never used. His Lordships, Gryffindor heritage, Parseltongue magic and family journals and much more. Feels like the build up to the actual plot and sequel that does not exist.

Some things are very apparent though.
Uber Harry, Mary Sue like there's no tomorrow.
Unboubded growth, beating your mentor after a few days, inexhaustible stamina and occlumecy makes you only need 3h sleep a day. Anyone who has done some endurance training or otherwise will shake their head.

Fresh sweat stinks in this universe for some reason and people shower 3 times a day.
Many homophone errors, there/their, you're/your, lose/loose, should've/should of, "hear, hearhere, here", parseltongue/parceltongue, seemed/seamed
I was pulled out of the story with such glaring errors every few lines.

A bit emo at times.
sharkey390 chapter 20 . 10/5/2019
I love your story. The characters had a nice interplay. Parts unfortunately seemed rushed towards the end but still great. I hope you come back and do the sequel
BaddieDZ2 chapter 16 . 8/19/2019
Lopsided smile. Lopsided smile. Lopsided smile. Lopsided smile. Lopsided smile. Lopsided smile.

LOPSIDED SMILE INTENSIFIES.
Corwyn chapter 20 . 8/16/2019
I loved this story! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Ame's world chapter 20 . 7/26/2019
A really truly wonderful fanfic !
I really enjoyed read this wonderful wonderful fanfic !
Thanks a lot
I hope to read more
CasperShot chapter 6 . 7/17/2019
I can't remember if this is in the story, but realistically the second Vernon or Petunia saw his newly expanded, furnishedcomfortable bedroom the conversation would have gone like this. "Like Hell were gonna let you stay in room that's nicer than our sweet and innocent Dudlykin's. Pack your shit and go down the hall, you're switching bedrooms" But, not before making the room as unlivable as possible obviously.
dragonriderluv chapter 14 . 7/8/2019
just wondering why chapters 13 & 14 are the same
dragoncop chapter 20 . 6/30/2019
Well I was hopping that you were doing a follow up story.
Guest chapter 20 . 3/3/2019
Please hurry up and write the sequel
Tenjo chapter 20 . 2/18/2019
Despite my earlier complaints (which I still stand by) this story was quite good. It’s an interesting take on Albus, since he’s not being bashed but he is still being doubted at least a bit and actually saw fit to start being honest. I particularly like the peace after that final conflict, it solidified the feeling of comradeship and history between Harry and the others (especially Albus, Minerva, Ron and Hermione). All in all, it was really fun to read after getting past the testy first few chapters and I hope the sequel is already up.
Tenjo chapter 18 . 2/18/2019
I’m curious who the several other people who glared at Harry were. I can understand Snape, but I was under the impression that those in the Order generally loved or worshipped Harry.
Tenjo chapter 15 . 2/18/2019
He’d seen Dudley blow out candles countless times? First of all, I’d doubt he was even allowed in the room on Dudley’s birthdays and even then there’d only been sixteen of them. Roughly two or three of which he wouldn’t actually remember due to being too young.
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