Could have been better had you remembered THAT EVERYONE IN THIS TIME LINE IS 12 AND UNDER (SO KISSING AND OTHER THINGS IS DISGUSTING), except for the teachers and other authority figures. :)

Right.. I tried. I really did. But I can only handle so much deus ex machina in a story. These 12 and 13 year old children suddenly have all the answers because their suddenly sentient magical cores told them things. So much for plot.

truly an amazing tale thank you

So what ever happened to Ron and Gilderoy?

good story over all but there are allot of inconsistencies in the timeline and things said happened then later act like they didn't.

Good, solid journeyman's work. A tale worth reading. Not a masterpiece, but those are far and few between. This was a most pleasing read and worthy of a second run later on. I thank you for sharing it.

One thing I have noted in all your tales I have read to date is that you fail to use a y when you enter something like "It saddens me greatly that the adults have failed you three so miserable." It should be Miserably.

Not a big thing as I take and copy each chapter(s) to Word and then make corrections as I go. I like to have tales that I've read available as a word file verses having to go back to . Especially as some have a tendency to vanishing.

I've corrected all your chapters to date in this tale and the ones I've read prior to this to American English, or at least the English I am use to. I do this solely for my own reading. I do not repost or offer it in any format to others.

I ask your pardon as I am probably 'three sheets to the wind' as I've indulged a touch this evening. That said I am enjoying thing story and I look forward to reading it to it's end.

Now that just grabbed the MOB by the short and curlys. Lol. Go Harry!

And there we have why I consider Dumbledore an MOB. While he does not wave his authority around in the books, he still FAILED in his job to protect Harry, a failure which, based on how Harry was treated I feel was intentional. He's not only an MOB he's also an SOB. Just because someone smiles it doesn't make them a good person.

Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it and I hope you will keep up the great work.

Very good Story except the Finish. I would have like to hear what happened in Langley and how many Kids they had (If Hogwarts had to create a fifth House, just for all the little Potters/Blacks and Tonkses running around)

Good story

This was a great story! I usually dislike harem stories but this one was lovely. I especially enjoyed that Harry was powerful, and so were the girls. A lot of stories slip his love interests in as a damsel in destress or make them boring and hot. You are a great writer and I'm excited to check out more of your works.

Wow, that pairing of Luna and Reggie literally came out of nowhere. They had no interactions, and we never even met Reggie. So how the fuck did you pair those two? That shit was so forced.

Then again, thats your MO, right? Inconsistent bullshit, whipped men, and forced situations and relationships that come out nowhere for no fucking reason. Go fuck yourself. Your mother was a gutter crusty bitch that whored herself like the two cent cuntmeat that she was.

So it's sexy being whipped? Wtf? Then again, your mother is damn sexy choking on a dick and getting rammed till next Sunday. The fuckmeat cunt takes it like a champ. Bet the crusty bitch wants a bastard in her belly so she can replace you.