Reviews for A Second Chance
Erebus Tenebris chapter 5 . 12/22/2019
Did you fall asleep during astronomy lessons? No offense if Earth were to double in size, there would be no catastrophic events you said. The only things that would happen would be A: the mass will multiply by 8. The gravity would become more powerful hence forth we will evolve and our legs and bones will become harder. And nothing else really. Not something that will destroy our solar system.
bobonater chapter 9 . 8/29/2018
Can you re write this this story if no one adopts it please it is too good to be left just to die. I don’t care if it takes years I just don’t want this story dead. :(
DestructionDarkness chapter 9 . 5/30/2018
Has anyone adopted this story if so can you put an update up about that please, because I reall love this so I hope it is adopted.
Trey of the rebellion chapter 9 . 3/5/2018
It's saddening to see this my friend, but I will take heart in your words.
xxPercyRoxxx chapter 9 . 3/5/2018
Well when someone adopts a story can you put up another chapter as to who has taken over it please.
ReadsWayTooMuch chapter 9 . 3/4/2018
I am sorry to hear that you are discontinuing your stories. I hope that's any new stories you make you are happy with. If I may ask, can you update the stories that have been adopted with the relevant information so we can read them? For example with this story you can update with the name of the author and the new name of the story. Thank you.
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 9 . 3/4/2018
Thanks for you work. Good luck in the future!
Spazzman29 chapter 3 . 7/14/2017
Your rendition of Tonks is disgusting. She a Metamorphmagi not a Succubus.
3facejyo chapter 8 . 11/5/2016
Amazing story I of the best I have read so far! Please tell me you will continue the story n if so when will the next chapter be out?
Guest chapter 6 . 5/1/2016
Bad story, stopped here. Problem is that there is no plot, just lots of pointless text. This is example of why are most superharry stories bad. Its not because superharry stories are bad by itself but that you in bad ones would rather skip 90% of paragraphs to read actual story. Here you add lot of abilities that won't be relevant to story or reduntant (newage ones, you could just make harry expert legilemens that can cast wandless accio for same effect), lot of unnedeed characters. With this pace one would read 100k words just to get for Harry's sorting.
Lady Whitlock-Black chapter 8 . 3/26/2016
Please tell me that you are going to continue this story!
Robert77833 chapter 8 . 12/13/2015
Really hope you continue this story, I like it the most of your work! Very interested in seeing Harry reshape this world, and presumably have to deal with whoever killed him in his own or the power that ended the Originals at some point?
Eating Upside Down chapter 2 . 9/24/2015
I hope you can understand why people would disrespect this story. It's all over the place. I mean you give so many details for minor things, rather than expanding on the actual plot. For example, you expect us to know what the hell you mean by a subscape, and to follow along with everything that happens inside. Then you blasé mention that old Harry is 32. Your rapid pace makes reading this story confusing and daunting. Huge paragraphs followed by more? Changes in narrative by Characters just introduced? Umbridge being slandered? Whose opinion of Umbridge is that? Yours or Harry's? Why did that matter or does that really belong when biggest wizard hospital is about to blow up? Are we reading this story or are you telling us a story? Not to shit on this story or anything but it seems like a really rough draft. Which is kinda telling in its own right. So yeah, people are gonna hate.
Zatarra12345 chapter 8 . 8/28/2015
Great story i can wait for the next chapter
sassy973 chapter 8 . 7/31/2015
Loved it update soon.
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