I’m having a hard time sticking around because everyone is acting like bloody idiots.
Harry is so fucking stupid it’s painful to read.
Everyone here who are friends seem to enjoy hurting each other. Hermione is a bitch and a huge hypocrite. Harry’s sister is an evil little bitch who doesn’t care about anyone but herself. She should have been punished much harsher for stealing Hermione swans especially as she has already stolen someone’s wand before. This is a second infraction, premeditates, then having Hermione act as a scapegoat, and lying. She got a slap on the wrist. While Hermione were harsher punished and Harry was slapped. I don’t like your character interactions and responses at all. None of them seem to be decent people.

Once again just wanna say how much I love Harry and Briannas relationship. Finally a realistic but sweet sibling relationship! Also it's nice to see Harry competitive streak really come through even more so than in canon where he can be a bit complacent. Anyway I love this so much!

lol the two names. hihi

I know kids do stupid stuff but I'm so mad at her

I love Harry and Briannas relationship. Every sibling ever: we'll fight constantly but won't question getting in trouble to help to smuggle your broom to school. I hope we'll see them together at hogwarts at some stage.

Glad to hear Penny might not have to drop Potions.

Absolutely loved your story. Look forward to the sequel

Wow. Everyone lecturing Harry on losing temper with Malfoy. How about they put themselves in his shoes and be tormented daily and then lecture about losing temper. It's so easy to lecture and not see things from the sufferers viewpoint! Hate them all.

My only complaint about a Harry Potter from Chicago os that there is no mention of Portillos, other than that, I’ve very much enjoyed binging this story. Onto the sequel Allonsy!

What? No thanksgiving? How dare they! While they are at it where are the European cowboys?

Also facial technology isn't in most areas and where it is they don't look for bank robbers they are used for serial killers and serious violent crime as most departments don't have the funding. Like if you violently attacked the bank teller it will place you much higher in the priority chain.

Banks get robbed all the time it's usually a 'note robbery' and depending if the suspect is armed or implied he was armed may have escalated charges from grand robbery up to armed robbery and attempted .

Most robberies are usually 'teller' robberies which the suspect doesn't try to gain entry into the vault but usually steals from the cash draw and the cashier is ordered by the bank to comply to all robbery demands so he or she will usually offer to clean out the other draws nearby. They may or may not have a dye pack but if you tell them no dye packs they will remove the wad of bills that have them so the suspect won't try to shoot up the bank.

The banks are insured against theft,robbery,fires,natural so they will comply to robber's demands.

If you rob Gringotts it will be a far different scenario if you just rob the front line and not try to get into the main vault you can still come out with a sizable amount. Most bank robberies you can net 5 to 6K in one go just from the cash drawers!

Outside of Detroit Chicago is one of the WORST places to raise someone unless you want them to be like the rioters that yell and scream. There's a reason millions of Americans have fled the cities and it's not for 'greener pastures'. Many whom lived their whole life their and sad to see their city trashed by bad policies and police not being the police.

Special Interest groups should NEVER run a city. I don't like Trump one bit but I don't like special interest groups taking over either telling a city it's confused over bathrooms and that's only a mild version.

I know it has been like 10 years since u last updated this but can you please add one more chapter

“Harry's face turned red as he lost his temper. "Then I don't want you at my party! I don't want any gift you might buy! You've gone too far this time. This isn't just a simple prank; you really hurt Hermione! You're a liar and a cheat! I don't even want you as my sister anymore! In fact, YOU'RE NOT MY REAL SISTER ANYWAY, AND I'M THROUGH PRETENDING YOU ARE!" He stormed out of her room, slamming the door behind him. He didn't see her start crying once the door was shut.”

At that moment...

Brianna realized...

That she really screwed up.