please continue. this story is very interesting

The grammar and writing are excellent. The story in depth.

This story is so interesting. I can't wait to see how it plays out.

Loving this story so far.
Have read "Harem Wars", and remember the harry chase moody mentioned in that one. The one you have is better. An as moody said, this is harry chase, round two

Bwahahahaha. The last line had me laughing.

Great story. Thanks for writing this much. I wish you had completed it.

Mediocrety is the only state this dead crap deserve, dead story full of shit and the arrogance of the writer is that he do a review and fix it, but still just shitty crap.

Please ignore people who bitch just because they can and finish this story. I happen to like your oc's. They have their own characteristics and are not 2 dimensional. There is so mush to this story to build on and that is also left hanging. Please finish. Draco just became a character I liked, I would also like him to meet Raze.

Want some Rye?
Sure you do.

I have been enjoying the story. I only found it online two days ago and have been reading it a few chapters at a time. I haven't posted anything to it because I was waiting to finish it. Now I find that you never finished it. Please, please do so. I know it has been almost 10 years since you last posted, but I hope you can pick it up and finish it. I think you are almost to the end.

An incomplete gem. So sad.

Nice I liked this chapter I can’t wait to find out more about wyarding

I write this after reading chapter 17. I know that your OCs are important for your plot. But they're boring. They are not well integrated into the story. And they keep mentioning yet more OCs who aren't even in the story. It's like you're telling only 2/3 of the story, and 1/3 of it is ruining the other because of the missing third. This is possibly the clunkiest story that didn't outright suck that I've ever read. The actual plot that you have isn't bad, but the inadequate OCs, frequent flashbacks, and other clunky bits really drag it down. Without those problems, it would be 7/10 material, but with all of the baggage it's about half of that. It's a chore to read. I skimmed through chapters 15-17 because they failed to capture my interest, having only minimal content relevant to the plot and a lot of filler related to characters I flat-out don't care about or know much about. You told 9 chapters of a very interesting story, and then threw it all away by joining it with another story that was only halfway coherent. So here is where I stop. I can't take it any more. I got to chapter 17, and the story has been trending continually downward since chapter 10. Overall I give this a disappointing 3.5/10.

80% of this story is told as flashbacks or memories of events that have already happened. It's extremely clunky! Just tell the story as it happens! How hard is that? A flashback or memory once or twice is fine, but that technique is extremely overused.

That said, the Moody fight was fun.

The first half was yet more infodump boredom, but the second half was good. I really hope that this story can recover to the point it was in chapters 9-10, because that was a fun story. But I'll only go another chapter or two if it doesn't.