| Reviews for Harry Potter's Promise |
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X.pix.X chapter 1 . 7/3 Kinda weird, I knew something was gonna go wrong as soon as Ron said those lines |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2019 "Harry carried Ginny down the stairs as fast as he could" Harry isn't exactly the sharpest tool, did he forget that he's a wizard? There's such a thing as a levitation charm which they learned first year, and after the troll should never forget. It should be blindingly obvious that physically carrying someone wounded is a terrible idea, since it's a guarantee that it will make the wounds worse, especially for a scrawny guy like Harry. |
typo chapter 1 . 6/11/2019 reveling - revealing And casting a stunning spell on Voldemort, especially after multiple explosive spells... what kind of idiocy is that? |
typo chapter 1 . 6/10/2019 reveling - revealing |
Corwyn chapter 1 . 4/23/2019 A beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it with us. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 So... Harry will treat her like Ron would, belittling, ignoring, insulting, with some jealous obsessive behaviour, easily swayed by any other pretty girl giving him the time of day? Ginny was flat out creepy weird. I get that you don't hate her or anything, but this could have fooled me. Good grief. |
BillBrink chapter 1 . 4/12/2018 Fun and entertaining! Thanks so much. |
Monster King chapter 1 . 3/17/2018 Great story I really liked it good job writing the story. |
tylermech66 chapter 1 . 2/25/2018 well, I suppose if they are both completely straight, then this makes complete sense. although for my perversions sake, I always make them bisexual :P |
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 2/23/2018 Probably as close as there is to a reasonable, believable harem story as well, so nicely don there. Thanks! |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 1/18/2018 A great one-shot of a story here! |
Specky Clarke chapter 1 . 7/13/2017 A great story. But what's wrong with Harry having more than one wife? It is fiction after all. It is surprising that so many authors impose thier own society's habits/traditions/religion/morals etc. to a fictional story. You have done it very nicely though. |
MissNikita chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 This was unique, most often its either harrys powerful magic pulling women to him or his head of two houses enforcing him to two wives, not here no, I love that it was Rons mistake that caused it |
noreenklose chapter 1 . 12/6/2016 Excellent handling of a well-worn story line. I greatly enjoyed reading it. Thanks for writing. |
InloveShinShi chapter 1 . 12/1/2016 Woah, u pulled out a harem story real great! I've never thought I would enjoy reading a harem, but u prove me wrong, man.. Real amazing |